Asphant Happy to do a review swap with you.

Mine is To My Sunflower

In particular, I'm looking for feedback on character design. You can read either Hinata or Eiji's POV. Read any amount of chapters is fine. I'll read yours tonight.

    Veronica8

    Done reviewing, extremely lucid work. Incredible.

    Edit:
    Not to berate your work. But BL is not my type of thing, so I have only read a few chapters then reviewed.

      Sigheti I will review yours tomorrow, I added it already to my library...to make sure I wont forget it.

      XOMatsumaeohana I will review yours later, I will inform you here after am done.

      As of now am no longer doing review swap, am getting busier, XOMatsumaeohana novel will be the last am going to review. Thanks for the swap review guys, awesome to discover good stories comng from talented Authors like you! Thank you all! Good luck!

        Asphant Not at all. I'm cool with that. Thank for giving it a go.

        I like your story, so as I've mentioned before I'll come back with some more feedback I hope will offer ideas. Probably won't be to weekend. Cheers.

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