NatsumeRikka IN MY LIBRARY. THANKS FOR YOUR HONEST REVIEW.OOPS!IM STILL WRITING WITH CAPS. THE TRUTH IS MY REGULAR JOB REQUIRES ME TO USE CAPLOCKS SO IM JUST USED TO IT BUT IM TRYING HARD SO I'LL EDIT THE CHAPTERS IN CAPLOCKS.

    stella2138 the chapters are kinda short but it’s not a bad story and kinda feel like if you had a forum for book updates ch.12 wouldn’t really be necessary

      PsyberRose i havent read it yet but im already hooked by synopsis this is getting into my library and deserves a nice review

      stella2138 I read yours and left a review. I hope you don't mind my critical review but I wish for you to get better as a writer. Please don't hesitate to ask me for more writing advice.

        stella2138 It would be my pleasure. I’ll read and review your story. I would appreciate some feedback myself, take your time however, my story is still short but I’m aware you have quite some stories in your queue already.

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