Krizzeir Thanks for liking it, expect mine tommorow

I don't want to just give you a review for giving sake

I want to understand it well and speak my mind😊

May1st hey there thanks for your words. i appreciate them. Would like to ask some suggestions about character and world design. Im a new author. So don't have much experience. Can you help me a little in this regard??

May1st
Well don't worry about english. It is not the only thing that matters. Nowadays language mistakes can be corrected through apps and sites and it is not a big thingy. What matters most is the plot. Can it attract the readers and how the characters affect the readers. And you are doing a good job in it. And here's my email

kritsufer007@gmail.com

Looking forward to your suggestions.

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