Title: The Greycloak Trials

This book is about a boy that has lived more than one life only to end up living in the Underworld. With a new body containing an ancient bloodline with special abilities he will have to overcome multiple trials to become powerful.

noctiferu Thank you very much. :smile_cat: Keeping myself going. I track my progress more to motivate myself. Otherwise, they'll all be hiatus stories and I'm not keen to go back into being a procrastinator XD.

ka1278 noctiferu
Me too!
Title- YOUR BETRAYING LOVE
Synopsis-
“One day you're going to remember me and how much I loved you… then you will hate yourself for letting me go.“ ...

Is it a crime to fall in love?
Rosella had never thought that she would be trapped in a web of politics, lies, deception, and misunderstandings.
What she wanted was love but received only pain and betrayal.
It is the story of a broken Empress, of her struggles inside a place full of ruthless schemes.

"How could you give me to any other man, I waited for you so long ! Did you ever love me or not?" asked Rosella

"You know darling! everything is fair in love and war!" Nicholas smirked.
"I wish that we would have never met in this lifetime and I pray, that we will not meet each other in the next one" screamed Rosella...

Even if I fall in love with someone new, it could never be the way I loved you...

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13290104306387005/YOUR-BETRAYING-LOVE
Thanks!

ka1278 Lol no worries. I tend to scare people off with my long posts.
What's your story?
Edit: found it nvm

    [unknown] I'm about to head off to sleep (late night once again), so I'll be on it first thing in the morning (or afternoon depending on the time I actually wake up hah). :)

      ka1278 Finished the detailed review earlier today, hope it's helpful~

        6 days later

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/13265500506303105/Champions-Rise

        here is my webnovel. Its still only 8 chapters, but I hope people enjoy it.

        It is a fantasy setting with magic, witches, demi-humans, swords, and all sorts.

        I am heavily inspired by Anime, Dungeons & Dragons, and various fantasy novels.

        If you enjoy, drop a SS and give a vote, or just grade the chapters, I welcome feedback and critique to help me improve.

          veinglory
          Hi Veinglory,

          Would you be interested in reading my story?

          I'll read yours

          Thanks😊

            noctiferu

            Allow me to join the fray? Hehe. Currently an entry for writing prompt #63

            Title: The Rightful Queen
            Genre: Fantasy
            Synopsis: Aurae Kingdom had two princesses, one born from the Queen, one born from a mistress. They were Princess Alkas and Princess Ariene. Their fate has been aligned since they were conceived... until a fire broke out inside the palace, killing the king, the mistress and the illegitimate princess.

            With no one else to stand in her way, Princess Alkas is ready to ascend the throne.

            If only a band of pirates isn't about to swipe the crown off her head.

            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13503059105033005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4301993775

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              Title: Way to the heavens
              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13460157606934905
              synopsis: In a world where everything is decided by power and cultivating soul energy. Wang Wei is born with the weakest soul form in the world but is determent to become the strongest soul expert in existence.

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                Title: Brutal Journey of an Unfortunate Female Heroine
                Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11724532206492105/Brutal-Journey-of-an-Unfortunate-Female-Heroine

                Synopsis: Reina wasn't killed. She didn't die by an accident. She fulfilled the conditions to a devil's inevitable game and was given a chance that only came to those who had the courage to take it, or in her case with no choice but to. Transported to another world she strives to defy the gods and live her life as she pleases but, will things really be that easy? Faced with unavoidable loses and trials Reina must overcome and harden herself for this new world where only the strong survive.

                Please comment on how I could improve as well! ฅʕ•̫͡•ʔฅ

                Chapter six is out! It's been 12 years since the fire. Let's see how Crown Prince Tylen and sir Hayden are doing.

                Title: The Rightful Queen
                Genre: Fantasy
                Tags: Adventure, Royalty, Pirates, Love, Family, Romance, Magic

                Synopsis:
                "Let me get this straight, you want a girl who had zero training to take her place as queen?"

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/13503059105033005/36590347702290962?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4301993775

                  To those, who like Harry Potter and reading fan-fictions!

                  My story has 16 chapters and more will be out soon!

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                  Synopsis:
                  When a person from our world dies and gets a chance to live in his favorite book. But not as the protagonist, no! He lives as an antagonist, aiming to become a great wizard and make his own legend.

                  Preferably with a chocolate card especially dedicated to him.

                  All the while trying to not mess up the 'plot' and appear 'clean' to both sides of the coming second Wizarding War.

                  Click HERE to read it!

                    Try my new novel:
                    Ghost Wife My Lifetime Love
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/13675747706830105/Ghost-Wife-My-Lifetime-Love
                    Meng Zichen lived with his grandfather from an early age. They ran a coffin shop. On that day, a wrinkled old lady came to their house in strange clothes and said some strange things. She also wanted to propose a marriage for him. Grandpa was in a bad mood when he found out. Then something strange happened that he had never seen before.

                      17 days later

                      I would like to get some constructive criticism! Only if you have time to spare on me, a noob writer. I would be really thankful.
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                      Human in a Demon's Hide

                      Synopsis-

                      I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier.

                      Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself.

                      I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws!

                      I had only a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt.

                      I just need the money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect.

                      The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on the family name. We became such a joke in the country that our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but I don’t care. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable!

                      To protect the smiles of my only family, I would do anything.

                      Yet, life knows to shit on you when things are just getting good.


                      Hello, author-san here!
                      This is my first story, set up in a fantasy world. It's based on the medieval AND steam era where magic is rarity and alchemy is used widely used as a weapon by people.

                      There would be lots of action, adventure, betrayal, tragedy, romance, etc. ahead.

                      Warning- The mc is a bit mean and foul-mouthed, introvert.

                      There would be strong language and lots of monologue narration by the MC.

                      The stories are fast-paced and progressing faster.

                      Also, English isn't my first language, so don't expect perfect grammar :(

                      P.S. - I would like some constructive critique and feedback!
                      It fills my motivation gauge and increases that rate of chapter/week.

                      (/>3<)/ thanks for checking out
                      (Demon's Hide)

                      Click for the link here

                        here is my novel
                        Name: Fortune of Flames- Sleeping soul of pearl

                        It's about a girl who suffered because of hatred and lost her father and her title as a young miss. Now she has returned with a different name and is completely changed girl. From a bright and happy girl to a cold and ruthless woman. she has different identities and will revenge for her family.

                        Plz do read and leave some reviews if possible....

                          I want to try writing a new genre and one that is quite lacking on webnovel, and that is a slice of life with a bit of comedy I guess.

                          Title: After School During Tuition (One Shot)

                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13797102206380905/After-School-During-Tuition-(One-Shot)

                          Synopsis: Ahh! School had ended and it is time to go home and relax... Who am I lying to? I have tuition after school every day.

                          Wait you don't know what is tuition?

                          Then join a colourful cast of characters as they give you the most inaccurate representation of what a tuition center is!

                          Hope you enjoy my one shot :D

                          I started writing a novel during my annual holidays. Since it's my first time writing a novel, the writing might be a bit childish and there'll be huge breaks before posting the next chapter, but hoping for some honest reviews.

                          The novel is on reincarnation, cultivation, ancient inheritance and multiple realms and worlds.

                          synopsis:
                          9 roars divine white tiger, a being which had surpassed all other creatures in its primordial world.
                          Dragons? They're just pesky flies waiting to be swatted.
                          Qilins? they make a good afternoon snack.
                          Humans? what are humans?
                          This mighty being, however, meets its demise at the hands of a sneak attack from a mysterious life form thought to be dead. Though not before storing all its knowledge and its bloodline in its fang for its fated successor who shall continue its search for higher power and revenge on its killer.
                          Who will be this lucky successor or will the fang be taken by the assailant, never to fulfill its destiny.

                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13781475206252805/Nine-Roars-to-Hell

                          Thank you

                          THE BILLIONAIRE'S ONLY LOVE

                          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13640855506628805

                          Sara Wang's life was not as fun and interesting as other's but she cared less about it. Well, not until she met The billionaire, Li Muchen. Then she watched her life take a drastic turn.

                          "I missed you"

                          She heard Li Muchen speak as she turned to walk away. His voice stopped her in her tracks. she turned to face him and confusion could clearly be seen on her face.. Muchen stared straight at her. He was obviously waiting for a reply

                          'what do I say? how do I respond?'
                          she tried to come up with something as she avoided his gaze.

                          As if he knew what she was thinking. He laughed and pulled her into a hug.

                          "Just say you missed me too"

                          He whispered into her ears....

                          Title: Hey Boss
                          Synopsis: Skylar begins a new job as the housekeeper for the Wilsons. She is to take care of their handsome son who is not fond of her. She tries to overcome the challenges he throws at her. How will these sworn enemies live together? Will their fights turn to friendship?

                          https://m.webnovel.com/book/13550116306272405

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                          Title: Phoenix Rise: XieRong
                          Synopsis:
                          In this world, only if you are strong, can you protect the people you love.

                          Dressing Xierong as Fa Chun, a limp and foolish boy, was one of the things her mother had done to ensure a relatively peaceful life until their escape. However, the treacherous people inside the Fa Estate had other plans.

                          When XieRong loses her mother at the hands of the Fa family, she runs away with her sister vowing to return stronger and take her.
                          PS. I've written more about what to expect in a review of my book.
                          Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/13744467406114805

                          Title: Convincing Her (Jen & Lucas)
                          Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/12883181205811205/Convincing-her-(Jen-%26-Lucas)
                          Genre: Romance (+18)
                          Summary: Jen was an independent business woman who was from a wealthy family that had gone through bad times.

                          After doing her best to try to restore her family to its former glory, a series of events caused her to move away from home.

                          On her journey towards self improvement, she met a man who was not only handsome, but also ridiculously wealthy.

                          Not only wealthy, but also extremely smart.

                          Not only smart but also very loving.

                          Not only loving, but also very determined to make her his.

                          If you want to swap reviews let me know by replying to this comment thanks :)

                          Title: Scars of My Past
                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12448266006474705
                          Genre: Realistic Fiction
                          Synopsis:
                          Christine, a 22-year-old college student, decides to open a blog and write a story about her tormented past.

                          As a young child, Christine was constantly abused and mocked by her classmates for her nearsightedness and portly complexion. To make matters worse, she was left to live with her aunt after her mother was assigned to work overseas and her father became too preoccupied in his work as a doctor.

                          This story is about a young woman's pursuit towards positivity and joy amid these turbulent times. For Christine, all she wants now is to face her fears and overcome them one by one.

                          So far, I've written over 100 chapters but no one bothered to review or comment. I'd be more than happy if you post a comment and critique my work if there's some improvement I need to do. Please leave your thoughts on the link above. It's very important.

                          noctiferu If you don't mind, let me advertise mine
                          I'm just shameless guy
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                          Title : Another World Peace Creator Magician

                          Author : RickuSan

                          Link : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13721278805974005

                          What is it about is a Famous spy in the world yet he's the most anonymous one, no one ever saw the real him dies in his mission because of a carelessness.

                          He got reincarnated in the other world but almost killed when he's still a 1yo baby, his mother saves him and he got adopted by a family who own bread store, but it's only the daughter left.

                          It's a story about his jurney to catch his dream as an adventurer because in the past, an adventurers he met motivated him.
                          And he will be a great magician in the future by a hard work and everything.

                          Please spare your time to read mine, i'd appreciate it, i'd be so grateful

                          Have a nice day
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                          Title : Legends Unite : MLBB FanFic
                          Genre: FanFiction
                          Summary: Set in modern times where the Land of Dawn is now overrun by humans and the other races like Orcs and Elves are now long forgotten. However, the humans are now struck by an unknown dark force slowly taking down each city one by one.

                          A group of 5 young descendants of the known legendary human heroes are about to set foot to find the mage who possesses the power of Order and Chaos to help bring peace once again to this world.

                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13827810705491105/Legends-Unite-%3A-MLBB-FanFic

                          This is actually an entry for a fanfic contest for Mobile Legends. Comments and Criticisms are very much welcome. This is my first ever published fanfic novel. Its still ongoing but I would greatly appreciate if I could receive some tips and guides in order for me to improve as a writer. _

                          I hope you enjoy reading my story.

                          Plugging~

                          Title: It Had to Be You
                          Genre: Romance
                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13446529606885405/It-Had-to-Be-You
                          Synopsis:
                          Ahn KyungHee wanted nothing more than to escape from her despairing, stigmatizing past as a druggie’s daughter. However, fate had other things in store. Just when she thought she was about to lose all hope, a special person from her past reappeared and gave her a whole new meaning of perseverance.

                          Despite the thirteen year wait, she once again found her first love; only now he was no longer the teenager brimming with righteous determination she once knew. Now, he was a prominent member of the Yakuza family—a man to be feared and revered, but a man who would do anything to give her the protection she never had, regardless of right or wrong. And in her heart, he would forever be the boy who befriended and held her hand while everyone else ostracized her. Then there was the hotheaded detective who was the bane of her existence, only to realize that she meant more to him than he could ever mean to her. To make matters worse, she could only choose one side: Police or Yakuza?

                          Light and dark didn’t mix. Just like tigers and dragons could not co-exist.

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