Nidalee I'll add it to my library. Could you take a look at mine? Duality.

The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

      Yuri_san16 Hey if you'd want I'd love to do a review swap? I review yours and you review mine. I want you to be completly honest and to not hold anything back since I'm a new writer. Of course, I'll do the same for yours. Let me know if your interested.

          Yuri_san16 I've only read your first chapter and I really enjoyed it, ill finish it by tomorrow so you can expect my full review then, If you want to talk more about each others novels, or advice on writting (I don't have the best advice since im new to writting as well) we can exchange contact info.

              Here's mine. Thanks for the thread! I'll try to get around to returning the favor but bear with me, where I'm at right now, things are a little hectic.
              https://www.webnovel.com/book/12643076006324705/No-One's-Hero

              Synopsis:
              Isaac was born to be the main character, and
              he knows it. Though, were it up to him, that would
              not be the case.
              He wants a quiet life. A normal life. For seventeen
              years Isaac has done everything he can to avoid
              the lead role.
              Supporting characters practically throw themselves
              head on into Isaac's path as he desperately tries to
              derail whatever Pilot Episode, Prologue, or Opening
              their "Chance Meeting" might result in.

              Isaac Gray might not be a bad guy,
              but he is certainly
              No One's Hero.

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