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I decided to do constructive review feedbacks again, there is a criteria this time though, this is link to new forum https://forum.webnovel.com/d/26425-giving-honest-constructive-feedback-to-first-10-links-read-rules

EDIT: I quit using webnovel around the 20th reply, Im not doing this anymore but apparetly you cant delete discussions anymore so I cant delete this so I will just ignore. Im starting to use wenovel again though as I am writing 'The Horror Celebrity : A World With Terrors' If you want to ad on here idc but Im not reviewing anymore, I dont think anyone else is reviewing either though there might be people clicking to find novels to read idk anyways byeee~

Hi Ive been afk from webnovel recently but been back again and active once more. Ive already read almost all the good translated novels on this site and novel updates that fit my tastes so now I have nothing free to read... I scrolled through some of the originals but honestly got bored skimming. So I was like why not read from the freshies? If you got a novel you started go and post it, Ill give it a try with a review and suggestion comments since I remember it was hard to get those when I did tryed writing. If you wish to read mine its called Creator of Legends: The Evolution Tree, this thread was mostly made cause Im bored and want to read new books though so post below!

Edit: Please no romance focused novels, I like romance but not really when thats the central focus of the book ty

    I added your novel to my library; will definitely check it out (seems like the type of thing I'd enjoy).

    Feel free to check out my novel: Mangull the Mangler
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/13508743406105905/Mangull-the-Mangler

    It's my first real stab at a novel, and I welcome any and all criticism (even small nits). Fantasy/Comedy genre for the most part. I will warn, though, that my chapter release will most likely be slow. With work and other projects I don't have too much spare time, plus I'm deliberately taking the time to make sure that I think everything through thoroughly with re: the plot-lines and characters (I've found that my personal "meta" notes often eclipse my actual story, due to this obsession with making sure everything will tie-together).

    Thanks in advance if you end up reading !

      niharikabhol Ill skip not really big fan twilight like romance novels plus love how its 1m views when asked for fresh lol

          Miss_Lazy Ill skip not really big fan of novels centralizied around romance ty for posting though

              Hello!

              If you are interested in some magic/cultivation/life/humor/drama/romance, please check my novel Xenon.

              The synopsis is:
              Alexandria is almost eighteen years old and has always lived repressed from society, not because she wants to, but because her father has kept her away from it.

              After unexpected situations, Alexandria finds a new home and undertakes her first adventure, starting a new life full of emotions and great challenges.

              Wait... Is that magic and... dimensions?

              Here is the link.

              I'm gonna be honest, it's a little bit slow, but I hope you like it 😊.
              If not, I tried 😅. Good luck with your search!

                Nidalee Was a little harsh but thats only way people truly improve. Also one last tip that I forgot to put when you write key scenes its good to look through your favorite books to see what they did so god that you liked, like I did this t my novel posted on this forum and it made my intro so good. Also it helps to write down key scenes / moments on a piece of paper, for example if its a pokemon thing (Puppy, Doggy, Three headed dog, Hadees dog, Gods dog) not like (crying for power, met fsvorite master, ate persn who attackef me) those scenes u keep in your mind revamp it over and over and also spontsniously create things that lead to those major momentsand edit the,

                    QueenCL sorry ill skip not really big fan of romance centralized focused novels...

                        IceSnowball Its only once chapter so cant really say anything but writing quality and grammer mistakes, grammer there was none, and writing quality was a 5 hopefully you dont ruin it and can keep it trough your novel than itll probably be great. I addedto library for now Ill review in the future

                            Well thank you for the shameless promotion opportunity. I guarantee a different experience with all of my stories.

                            Title: Zaldizko
                            Link: https://tinyurl.com/webnovzaldi
                            Tags: LGBT, Historical Fiction, YA Fantasy, Brotherhood, Action, Adventure, Gunslinging
                            Blurb: "I'll find a way to save my brother. Do whatever the hell you want. I'm stealing your guns."

                            Famine is a man determined to save his three brothers after they were tragically separated when a magical fire destroyed their monastery home. He finds himself in a foreign city called Apocalypse. There he falls in with the Evadale Knight Order security group, which guards the Hell's Labyrinth prison facility. The prison's system goes haywire upon his arrival.

                            Amongst prison chaos, Famine learns that his missing brothers are somewhere within the area. He'd do anything to save and reunite his family, even if it meant fighting malignant redback spiders and a mind-sucking demon. The fights he faces may be more than he can handle.

                            This is volume one of the Seriphyn Knight Chronicles.

                            It begins.

                            Note: there are some romance elements (pushing it in the BL cat). The plot is hopefully straight forward being Famine doing what he can to find and rescue his brothers. Skip if it isn't your thing.

                            Title: To My Sunflower
                            Genre: Historical Fiction
                            Tags: BL - LBGT - Pacificwar - Japan - 1945
                            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12685931606615605

                            A slow burner romance drama/slice of life told from two angles. If you like stories like In This Corner of the World or The Silent Voice, this one may appeal. It's a story about the final year of WW2 told on Japanese soil from the eyes of same-sex lovers, Hinata and Eiji.

                            • Hinata was waiting for his lover to return from war and receives the news of his death. This perspective tells of his village life in the countryside and the slow reveal of discrimination and hardships of Japan's civilians.

                            • Eiji is a soldier fighting the war from his home front. Iwo Jima was meant to be his last tour, but he fell injured in a banzai charge and was classified as dead. He recovered with the aid of an American lieutenant who escorts him back into the mainland for espionage work. Eiji is doing what he can to return to Hinata.

                            [Note:] there is romance but this isn't the focus of the book. The book is about showing the wartimes through these men's eyes.

                            Skip if it isn't your thing. :grin:

                            I have more, but they are a fresh and with a small amount of chapters. So, I'm building these up until I promote them out.

                            I removed To Like A Man. I just saw your "no romance" mandate. Sorry about that.
                            Thanks again. I hope these pique interest and end up an okay read.

                            Cheers.

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