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Aiya123 I'll read it. And here's mine, Duality.

The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

Aiya123
Hello I've read your novel and so here's mine
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13914700306309005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305607363

Well I gotta say that it pays to install Grammarly in your system or phone to check for avoidable grammatical mistakes before publishing.

Just an old timer here, regularly churns out about 2 chapter a day minimum and releasing them using a timer

Have a peel through somewhere on 2.1 onwards. The 1st series kinda treated like a warm up. The 2nd series of the novel should be alright though.

Cheers ~

How about we swap reviews?
The story am currently writing is titled Quick Transmigration - Counter Attack of Various Characters
Synopsis : Su Li dies of a chronic illness and her soul is bound to a system. Now this could be considered a blessing in disguise. Though skeptical and wary, she still decides to put her best foot forward.

She completes her assigned tasks earnestly keeping in mind not to let anyone catch on to the fact that the genuine goods have been overtaken by her. However, she soon realises that someone keeps following her from one world to another.

Slowly but surely she tries to figure out the reason for all of this world hopping business. Will she be able to get rid of the shackles placed on her by the system? Will she repudiate her deal with the system? Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer?

Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer? Only time will tell but untill then she needs to pull up her socks and get down to the business of counter attacking in lieu of various characters - cannon fodder, second female lead, main character, anti heroine, villainess etc.
Link : https://m.webnovel.com/book/13407968206765605

JohnnyKbca Ok sure. ill get back to you when I've finished.
And thanks for reading mine.

JohnnyKbca Done, Great read. Will keep in my library and support when I can.

Don't forget to review mine.

Aiya123
Read your story.
The premise is interesting.
Gave the review.
Hoping to hear back from you soon.

Read "The Under Life: A New Beginning"

Aiya123 ni hao...
Grammarly that I used only corrects certain grammatical mistakes. Still need to proof read them before publishing though. Looking for a better tool to actually emphasis more to creative writing instead.

Cheers

Mavislin11 hmmm, interesting. I'll read and review if you do the same.
Expect a review within 5 days.

Aiya123 , I would love to

Cold as ice Pale as moon
Author - VILU
It's a novel on muder - mystery

Synopsis -
There is a time to LOVE ,
A time to HATE ,
A time to HEAL ,
. . .
And a time to KILL.

On a freezing cold winter's day, the body of a young women is pulled from an icy canal in London . To D.I.Dan Carter it looks like a tragic accident rather than the work of a murderer . But D.C.Ebony Willis is not so sure . Why has the women's face been painter with garish make - up and wrapped in a plastic bag?

Meanwhile cosmetic saleswomen Tracy Collins receives a phonecall . It's been twenty years since she gave up on her daughter for adoption , so when Danielle gets in touch , she hesitantly begins to Kindle a relationship with her and her grandson Jackson but when Danielle suddenly disappears , Tracy is plunged into the middle of a living nightmare .

With the discovery of another body , it becomes clear that Danielle is in grave danger . There is no time to lose and Ebony Willis must take on the most challenging assignment of her career — to play the role of the killer's next victim.

It might have some unpleasant parts like checking out a dead boby. It's a good novel.

Link : https://m.webnovel.com/book/13988573806881505

Please give this novel a try , I won't let you down.
Thank you

Rachel_white likes this.

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

Title : The Arks

Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

Shiksha_Jerath done GREAT BOOK!!, more chapters

VILU Sure, i will take a look. Im a bit backed up on bokks but expect a review in 10 days

Aiya123 https://www.webnovel.com/book/13863676206841805/The-Rise-of-the-White-Lotus

this is my link. I'll review yours after I finished the others :)

PaperbackWriter I read your synopsis and I must tell that it really piqued my interest. however, you should do a quick check as I spotted one or two typos which can discourage readers and give an impression that it won't be an easy read.

Also, though you did a great job describing the surrounding on the first chapter, what I find awkward or rather gave me a 'huh?' is when MC just assumed that he transmigrated -- just like that. I might leave a proper review after reading a couple more chapters. Good job!