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Clara started her first day as a cleaner in a mansion. It was only after many failures at securing a stable job (consequentially failing at improving her quality of life), that her friend finally referred her to this oneโ
Hey donโt get me wrong, you did good correcting all the mistakes, but technically that was only proof reading; editing consists of a bit more, such as reconstructing sentences, fixing passive verbs,
gerunds, cutting out needless wordsโall in all, improving readability.
Then again, I donโt work as an editor professionally, so I may not have any idea of what I am talking about, but that is usually what I and other editors on this site do (for translated novels).