‘I’m but a tree, hence I cannot help you. My own roots are stuck in the belly of Mother Earth, hence I cannot reach you. No eyes adorn my bark, hence I cannot cry for you.’
In the year 1500, a tree tormented by his own memory and prejudice against society, makes a moral journey throughout Europe of the 16th century, where he learns to live trough the eyes of various figures.
This story was originally created for writing contest 62.
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Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
Author: Pathway to Eternity
Lappidappi I have read your work. I would say it's very impressive. Your introduction is very good. It's a bit early for me to comment on the plot as a whole though I know it's a game world. I will follow and review when the time is right. But if you want me to review now, kindly say so.
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Author: Pathway to Eternity
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart
High school romance Japanese manga style with a splash of sci-fi. That includes the ensemble cast forcing the reader to invest quite some time to get to know the cast. Oh, add endless slice of life to that.
This is where you bow out if the setup isn't to your taste.
You wrote 'discuss' so I'll take the opportunity to do just that. I'd label the story as seinen/josei rather than shounen/shoujo, and themes definitely run into the territory of adult with the exception of graphic sexuality. At over 200 chapters there's a lot to read, but I'm probably better at handling the language than at writing a dashing story.
I'm primarily after readers, but sure, a review if you deem it worth the effort is always welcome.
Mavislin11
I have read your work and is impressive. As a fellow elements affiliate, I greet you. I will wait a bit more before making a review. But if you want me to now, kindly let me know.
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Bl4ckbear
I have read your work but because it's only a chapter, I didn't make a whole review. I only commented on the chapter. I have to tell you, you have a big burden on your shoulder. I will be here, following and encouraging you. Great job.
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Author: Pathway to Eternity
marjzach2012 I will get to your work later. I surely will.
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Sigheti
I will read and review your work soon.
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StenDuring
I will read and review soon. Patience.
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I've recently written this novel still working on it, tell me what you think of it. https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14233672705713505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306665844
I wouldnt mind a little feed back and would certainly return the favor.
Hi:)
This is my story. It's called Her Sole Desire.
Her revenge, her desire, the only thing she came back for.
Her father sent her abroad in order to protect her, however in the end he couldn’t even protect himself.
Now she comes back less innocent, less naïve, and with knowledge of how the world turns.
She doesn’t want anyone else’s help. It’s her own personal business. So why is it when Lawyer Han offers her his hand, she finds him so very attractive?
Edited by Glowing Butterfly
Thanks:)
Sigheti
I have read and reviewed your work. Really good.
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Author: Pathway to Eternity
IceSnowball
Please make it easier with a link. Afterall, the whole universe is a link 
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Author: Pathway to Eternity
Sigheti
Mind you, I'm a daoist 
Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
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marjzach2012
Oh dear Marjzach. Just read and reviewed your work. I have to say that you really love big boobs and music which made laugh . You put your heart into the work, I truly commend you. Great work.
Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
Author: Pathway to Eternity
Endtime
The introduction to the storyline is very good and the storyline is filled with potentials. From your writing I'm guessing this must be your first major writing? You have no limit.
Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
Author: Pathway to Eternity
OKelley Mighty Seraph, i have checked out your work as instructed. I've only left a comment since it's only six chapters yet but will be following for future review. Great work.
Immortality is achieved through the Dao.
Author: Pathway to Eternity
