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Author: Pathway to Eternity

    Lappidappi I have read your work. I would say it's very impressive. Your introduction is very good. It's a bit early for me to comment on the plot as a whole though I know it's a game world. I will follow and review when the time is right. But if you want me to review now, kindly say so.

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    Author: Pathway to Eternity

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart

        High school romance Japanese manga style with a splash of sci-fi. That includes the ensemble cast forcing the reader to invest quite some time to get to know the cast. Oh, add endless slice of life to that.

        This is where you bow out if the setup isn't to your taste.

        You wrote 'discuss' so I'll take the opportunity to do just that. I'd label the story as seinen/josei rather than shounen/shoujo, and themes definitely run into the territory of adult with the exception of graphic sexuality. At over 200 chapters there's a lot to read, but I'm probably better at handling the language than at writing a dashing story.

        I'm primarily after readers, but sure, a review if you deem it worth the effort is always welcome.

          Mavislin11
          I have read your work and is impressive. As a fellow elements affiliate, I greet you. I will wait a bit more before making a review. But if you want me to now, kindly let me know.

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          Author: Pathway to Eternity

            Bl4ckbear
            I have read your work but because it's only a chapter, I didn't make a whole review. I only commented on the chapter. I have to tell you, you have a big burden on your shoulder. I will be here, following and encouraging you. Great job.

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            Author: Pathway to Eternity

                alernatetext

                Hi:)
                This is my story. It's called Her Sole Desire.

                Her revenge, her desire, the only thing she came back for.

                Her father sent her abroad in order to protect her, however in the end he couldn’t even protect himself.

                Now she comes back less innocent, less naïve, and with knowledge of how the world turns.

                She doesn’t want anyone else’s help. It’s her own personal business. So why is it when Lawyer Han offers her his hand, she finds him so very attractive?

                Edited by Glowing Butterfly

                Thanks:)

                  marjzach2012
                  Oh dear Marjzach. Just read and reviewed your work. I have to say that you really love big boobs and music which made laugh 😂. You put your heart into the work, I truly commend you. Great work.

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                  Author: Pathway to Eternity

                      Endtime
                      The introduction to the storyline is very good and the storyline is filled with potentials. From your writing I'm guessing this must be your first major writing? You have no limit.

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                      Author: Pathway to Eternity

                          OKelley Mighty Seraph, i have checked out your work as instructed. I've only left a comment since it's only six chapters yet but will be following for future review. Great work.

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                          Author: Pathway to Eternity

                              Primate
                              Thank you. The link below your name in the signature links to something by Sighn. Was trying to check it out

                                  My books are different to what you'll find here. Completely. I don't write to mass cliches, but rather to a very grain-small niche that has kind of left me hanging out in cold at the moment :eyes:

                                  My flagship novel is Zaldizko
                                  Genre: Magical Realism
                                  Tags; Historical Fantasy - YA Fantasy - LGBTQ - BL - Gay Protagonist - Brotherhood - Swords and Magic - Order of Knights - Underworld - Action - Adventure

                                  Set in an alternative Jazz Age. Famine is a man who will do anything, fight anyone to save his three brothers who have been kidnapped to an industrial city called Apocalypse. This story is a gunslinging, sword fighting action-adventure wild ride to rescue the family.

                                  Its sequel is The Fourth Zaldizko
                                  Genre: Magical Realism
                                  Tags; Historical Fantasy - YA Fantasy - LGBTQ - BL - Gay Protagonist - Brotherhood - Swords and Magic - Order of Knights - Underworld - Action - Adventure

                                  Following directly after Zaldizko with the same ensemble. This story looks deeper into the world and characters with the premise of saving the baby brother as the plot driver. There are more BL in this one since the MC and LI have become an official couple.

                                  • My book perks: 99% flawless grammar, probably to the point that it reads strange since it's fluent and intuitive.
                                  • Cons: My style of writing can be subtle and uses a bit of symbolism, so somethings will likely go over heads. I guess it doesn't help when I'm not writing to a specific trope or cliche, so there will be elements where it feels lacking, is missed or minds do not compute.
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