VateRise Can you check out my new novel please, just one chap, I wanna know what you think, you don't have to review, please tell me what you think in the comment section

I wanna know if it's worth spending my time on

Thank you in advance

Title: HEARTBREAK IS REAL

      Allen_Clay012 I reviewed it, not really impressed. Yaoyueyi gave you a lot of thing you can improve, but her score doesn't reflect that. She is probably too nice to do that, but I'm not. At this stage, that is the score.

          By the way. I got many requests, so it will take some time to review everything. That is why, anything below this post, will not be reviewed. The thread is closed now, and I will not take any new novel for reviews. At least for now.

            Love the honest attitude, so here's mine XD:
            Synopsis: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14316549305962705
            *A FanFic of the White Wolf video game Vampire: the Masquerade Bloodline.
            Chasing after a shadow from her past, Leona entered the world of the mystical blood-thirsty undead, but the awaiting danger is far greater than she could ever imagine: the grand game of politics, the battling sides of humanity and beast in their nature, and the brutal Jyhad in the modern nights...Lost and afraid in this chaos, she has to continue on this path--because there is no going back.

              SharpJester I did a review on the 1st book. I'll retrain from doing the second one. If what I saw in 1st, is the same in 2nd (not the plot). Then you will get similar score. Seriously editing it and increase the release rate, would make it much much good.

                  VateRise Thank god I was fast, you are brutally honest 😂😂😂, am among the queue now, don't ditch me😶😶😶.

                  It's just one chap, just one😉😉😉please please, I wanna know what you think

                      AlmightyKnight I reviewed it. My honest opinion? Rewrite that. You have only 2 chapters, which shouldn't be hard. Be original, instead of copying famous and overused concepts.

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