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VateRise Thank god I was fast, you are brutally honest , am among the queue now, don't ditch me.

It's just one chap, just oneplease please, I wanna know what you think

May1st I posted a comment for you. Everything's there, so have a look.

VateRise Thank you

VateRise I understand, thank you for reviewing my work.

VateRise
Ok.thanks anyway....

I would absolutely love an honest review. Here's the link!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14227206905696705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4301672609
Title: My Little Sunshine

VateRise I'l take you on your offer since I've started to rewrite one of my novels: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14254656706841305/The-Fairy-And-The-Demon-King%3A-Definitive-Version
Thank you in advance!

ExodusGaming555 I think I have dejavu with this. Anyway, review is ready.

Bored_Sage Yea... Well the review says it all. I have nothing else to add.

VateRise Here is my novel link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13500525605023205/Fortune-of-flames---Sleeping-soul-of-pearl

VateRise

I do not know if having the novel FINISHED is a requirement, but I will paste the link anyway. Please be as blunt as you can and help me out: give me some pointers on what I’m doing wrong. I accept all criticism!

Thanks a bunch!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14294911306970805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306684050

TheExtraDoor review is ready. A good piece of work. Seriously guys, go and have a read.

VateRise Thank you so much for taking the time to review it! I really appreciate it! :smile:

I could use an honest review. That is if you have the time.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13694722005845705/Ah-Chun

Please give me an honest review - I would need it quite a bit, hehe.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12886610505826805

It's a project of mine that I translated from a different language but kept the sentence structure the same to match the timeframe of the plot, so there might be a little issue with the lack of pronouns/etc...

VateRise Alright, I know that I need to rework the first half (like 9 or so chapters) because I went way too briefly over it and need to give more characterization to other people in the story. I also know that I haven't focused on the detail and focus of the environment, technology, bordering nations, etc. This is a WIP, but please be honest with it!

https://www.webnovel.com/book/11329115905340105/The-Last-Space-King

P.S. the latter chapters are better