moleypotato sure... I'll be lenient... However sometimes there r readers who find it a bit of an obstacle for reading... So pls do work on that for a greater amount of readers... 😊

    _IHA_FAB_ Thanks. There' s not a lot in the story to be honest, so you'll probably won't notice. Especially in the first five chapters. I'm okay if you critique up to the first few chapters as these are critical. Thanks.

      ShinSungmi hey that's v!!
      She's fangirling
      Lol
      I'm new to this forum.. so what basically is a "review swap"? Could u pls explain it?

        _Rain sure dear... I'm caught up with others but I'll surely drop my yours

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