Hey ppl.. I'm basically not much of a writer but I'm good at reviews.. so I'm gonna give u a very solid reviews about your novels... Lemme know and give me the link to your novels...
One thing if u have poor grammar or shaky plots, I will be honest and tell u that... Hope u keep that in mind and give the links to your novels...

Hope to read your novels

    Are you okay with some BL/LGBTQ elements in a story?

    I have a fantasy story where I'm after perspective of character and world design.

    My book is The Fourth Zaldizko. It's a sequel but I'm aiming to make it read as a standalone. I intend to self publish this, so taking as much feedback to identify any commonly noted weaknesses/areas of improvement.

    If you're up for the read of what ever number chapters you want, let me know.

      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

      Title: The Arks

      Synopsis: In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

      The Great Noble War made its name throughout the Universe by taking down a multitude of stars. From the remnants of galaxies that were affected, the Solar System was created. In that System, a particular planet stood out from the rest as a haven to all; Earth.

        Hello! Not sure if you'd be interested but I'm just gonna go ahead and leave this here:
        Second Chance Addison
        https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14077439505251105
        It is a story about a CEO/tycoon but I'm trying to steer away from the typical stereotypes. The ML has been betrayed and lost everything. He is then given an opportunity to take over for someone who was way more successful than he was before.

          _IHA_FAB_ Try mine, Duality.

          The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

          From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

              Huldomo review swap?

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              Title: The Arks

              Synopsis: In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

              The Great Noble War made its name throughout the Universe by taking down a multitude of stars. From the remnants of galaxies that were affected, the Solar System was created. In that System, a particular planet stood out from the rest as a haven to all; Earth.

                  Hi everyone,

                  I just published my first-ever book here so I hope to get some help. Will return the favor. Thanks

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/14284968905867405/ACTS%3A-Amazing-Children-and-Teens-Stories

                  This is an anthology of short stories and literature written for children and teens of all ages by an author who will forever be a young kid at heart.

                  In its initial release, three amazing short tales are featured: Rusty’s Water Robot Dad, Emilio’s Incredible Farm, and Charlikin the Asthmatic and the Pink Lizard.

                  Each story has different characters who will leave readers great lessons in life. Read them along with your family and young mind during bonding time or as bed time stories. Definitely, all stories can be finished in one sitting.

                  New stories will be added as chapters in this collection of tales. Leave your comments if you wants more and suggestion for any story you want the author to write about.

                    AnthonyCharles review swap?

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                    Title: The Arks

                    Synopsis: In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

                    The Great Noble War made its name throughout the Universe by taking down a multitude of stars. From the remnants of galaxies that were affected, the Solar System was created. In that System, a particular planet stood out from the rest as a haven to all; Earth.

                        Vrinda13 sure I'll look into it and give u a feedback... Where do I give u the review tho? Here or somewhere else?

                            stella2138 gimme some time lovely author... 😍 I'll look into yours... Rn a bit caught up with exams and mocks... But I'll give u a review... Lemme know where to give u the review

                                _IHA_FAB_ https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303977620

                                Title: The Arks

                                Synopsis: In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

                                The Great Noble War made its name throughout the Universe by taking down a multitude of stars. From the remnants of galaxies that were affected, the Solar System was created. In that System, a particular planet stood out from the rest as a haven to all; Earth.

                                    MuZikr hey man.. it's alright about the tense and stuff.. but I'll surely look into it... Just a bit stuck with grand mocks (uwaaahhh) so pray for me and I'll get back to u as soon as possible...
                                    (P.S. lemme know where u want the reviews. Should I write them in the comment sections of the chapters or email them to you)

                                        Mavislin11 hey author.. that's a really interesting plot.. just gimme some time as I'm stuck with mocks... I'll give u reviews chapter by chapter or highest 3 chapters at a go.
                                        P.S. lemme know where u want the review to be posted. In the comment section or in the email form

                                            zetsubouaichan sure... That's a light read ... And I can squeeze that into my schedule to relieve some exam stress... Yippee..... I'll write a review
                                            (P.S. should I post the review at the end of the chapters or you want an email)

                                              zetsubouaichan first review for the 1st chap is posted in the comment section of the chapter... Look for the next ones in the upcoming comment sections...
                                              😊

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                                                Title: Nova Roma
                                                Genre: History, Fantasy
                                                Our protagonist was a Mexican who died on a flight, when he woke up he found Apollo who reincarnated him as the grandson of Gaius Octavian Turino (Augustus) the first Roman emperor, having a mission in hand to conquer the New World to save the Roman polytheist world and his existence.

                                                Our protagonist will be able to develop the great Roman civilization in America and survive the different ones that exist in this distant land ...

                                                https://www.webnovel.com/book/13873567705871905/Nova-Roma

                                                  valeriex hey man... The review for the 1st chapter is up on the comment section... Keep an eye for the later ones

                                                      TheExtraDoor I'm surely interested in reading it my dear... Just gimme some time as I'm in between mocks and reviewing other novels... All I want is your patience and I'll surely repay u with a very constructive review😇😇😇

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