Hiya, I've recently joined the WPC #96 and am hoping to get some feedback in the comments mainly because I want to check if my storyline has a nice flow :3

https://www.webnovel.com/book/15775212505912005

Title: Embers: Awakening

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Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Action, Isekai
Summary:
A dragon finds herself lost on Earth surrounded by a plethora of things she cannot understand. Will she ever find her way home? Or will she be forever searching for a way to get back?

Join Ember on her quest to find herself and her home, as she faces the obstacles and problems in a world with humans. It's not easy to try and stay undercover when you're from a completely different realm…

  • I actually had just started my main novel before I had seen this contest and thought it would be a great prompt to use for this specific character - so this novel branches off my main one that I haven't progressed in much... yet!
  • It's mainly based on the concept of multiple dimensions and realms within a fantasy universe, if you're fond of that kind of stuff and it's filled with a variety of mythical creatures
  • Does contain strong language and mildly inappropriate scenes

I hope you enjoy reading my story and feel free to vote for me if you like it! I would appreciate it! 💖
(P.S. The mc is actually my pfp, I drew her a while back lol)

    Paris_Kat Woah woah woah. Hold up. Is this a fantasy character getting sent to our side of things for once? I applaud you Miss/Mr on the idea. I for one would love to read the story since well I'm enjoying reading the novels of my fellow #96 writing prompt writers. There's been some nuggets of gold so far and from your synopsis alone I have a feeling yours may also be one.

        X237 Thank you! I've just started your novel (student life sucks :')))) But so far I really love how the writing is continuous thought/narration! I fell like it helps me connect with the characters more! I'll probably get my review up by tomorrow or the day after since there are 10 chapters. Hope you don't mind!

            May as well toss mine here, was originally intended for #96 but for whatever reason it wouldnt take so I kept posting it up anyways...

            Title: The Immortal Kobold
            Genre: Fantasy
            Warning: Theres some adult situations, or furry/scaly situations

            Synopsis: Xing Lei had finally reached his dream, surrounded by his family and friends, his cultivation had reached the final threshold, just one final tribulation and he would become the apex.

            But the heavens are indeed blind and spiteful.

            The tribulation sent rocks the realm, no man, no matter how strong could survive these bolts cast from existence itself.

            And thus, Xing Lei was annihilated at the finish line.

            Yet fate played a hand, stealing him from Deaths cold embrace, casting him into reincarnation, Xing Lei finds himself in a new realm, so alien to his own. He is weak. He is mortal. Yet worst of all he is not even human any more!

            So begins Xing Lei's climb up the mountain again, from pitiful mortal to cultivation god. He must become... the Immortal Kobold!

            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/15769109405892105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305723293

              Hello everyone! Amateur writer here who usually waits for midnight to write stuff. It's my first time on forums so I might as well be shameless. Please feel free to correct me or criticize my book, I have thick skin. Anyway, the novel I would like to promote....

              Novel: Faces of the Demon King (Sorry for the plain cover, I'm currently working on personally drawing a new one)
              Genre: Eastern Fantasy (Very influenced by Chinese dramas and novels based on cultivation)

              ***Synopsis: A lunatic shunned by his whole family reveals himself to be the new cruel and powerful Demon King? The Heavens must be dying!

              "It is demonic cultivation! Everyone, put down your weapons and stay away from Wu Yong!" Ming Zhe Di glared at the new Demon King, regretting his decision. He should have agreed with his colleagues even if his instincts told him the suspect was innocent. He gathered the powerful cultivators, "Attack Wu Yong, keep the disciples away from him. Look, he is not the same lunatic you knew."

              The most skilled cultivators nod slowly. Xue Weifeng stubbornly flared her nostrils and grit her teeth. She withdrew from the group with her whip held ready to attack. She paused to say, "You should have sent him to the courtyards! I cannot believe the Righteous Council had such a stupid leader. If you did not release him, our disciples and friends would not be harmed."

              The Righteous Council watched as Wu Yong treated his opponents like twigs. Ming Zhe Di studied the swirling smoke drifting from his body, shocked beyond measure. He could see the cultivators use so much strength yet the lunatic stayed unscathed. The old master shook his head in disbelief. "He does not have to move, it is as if spirits are helping him! Xue Weifeng, tell the kids to be careful! We are dealing with the new Demon King."

              ***Link (I hope): https://www.webnovel.com/book/14748345105499505

              **Warnings:
              As you can see, my writing style is atrocious and I know I'm an amateur. I am trying to improve because my paragraphs are so long with too much dialogue. Help is highly appreciated.
              This novel includes Author's notes in most chapters to explain origin of names and because I have created my own world based on cultivation, I need to explain that too.
              Note that this novel contains violence.
              *I try to update regularly but this new year is going to be hectic because of my studies so be aware of cliffhangers and slow updates.

              Thank you for this opportunity. Also, I apologize for the long post. If anyone needs a reader, I will gladly trade books.

                marldita That's alright with me. I like writing in a similar way too with flower guy. Also tha cover is drawn by you? That's amazingly well done.

                  Hey guys!! Author here shamelessly promoting my novel! The idea was to write something more "realistic" and to my liking since I've read so many novels and watched so many animes but they always miss something. Even though it's the first time I'm doing something like this I do feel it's going to be a great work. More over, it will be a big one, more than 1000 chapters... I'm going to end the introduction here hheeh since it's better to see for yourself. See ya!!

                  [links]https://www.webnovel.com/book/15490438406738005

                  Transcending the Cage

                  Type: Fan-Fic
                  Tags
                  Harem (not the type where the MC catch woman like they were pokemon and for no reason) / R-18 / Romance / Martial-Arts / Magic / Mature / Cultivation / OP MC / Transmigracion
                  Synopsis
                  The monotonous and mundane life of the young man named Maksim Caeles Alareiks has turned upside down when as he falls into bed to sleep, he wakes up in a strange place. Where, besides the furniture and the being who looked identical as he, everything else is black, giving the infinite feeling of Space. There was no up, down, left or right. In spite of all this, little did he know that this was his turning point in life, a chance he so much sought to fight against fate. However, at the same time, he would embark on an arduous path that at the slightest slip would destroy him completely.

                  Worlds:
                  First: Inspired by Shijou Saikyou no Deshi Kenichi

                  Note:
                  This story encompasses several different worlds, INSPIRED (not identical) in anime, novels or my own imagination. It will have many chapters, but I can't promise anything about the frequency of updates, as I will only be able to write in my free time.

                    X237 Thank you. I was busy last 2 days for My Semester Final examination. So couldn't check the reply. 😊 I will read your novel from here. If possible later when our novel have more chapters let a review swap. Good luck. ✌👍

                        Hi I'm a new member/writer here and I just published an original novel. Please read it and tell me what you think. Thank you so much.

                        Title: Remnant: A Battle Within
                        Link:
                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/15843828305113805/42530553508982754

                        Here's the synopsis:

                        After the stars fell, the world of Prism was plunged into uncertainty. Powers that man did not have started to show from different people.

                        With the manifestation of these powers, countries started to covet these beings for their own.

                        A war is brewing on the horizon and with the movement of someone in the shadows, this war will either break or create the world anew.

                        In the midst of this, Orion will venture to the world and discover the secrets of the fallen stars. He will be the one called 'King', the savior of the world.

                        But nothing is what it seems in a world where the known became unknown. Fate will continue it's course no matter if he likes it or not.

                          This is my third attempt in making a full-fledged story. It's currently on its third volume! And yeah, I hope this helps.
                          Title: The Doctor Of Death
                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15084062705728305
                          Genre: Military, Historical Fiction
                          Synopsis:
                          The time is the early 18th century and a plague struck Britain on its first week it killed more than thousands of people and time is running out for those who got infected by it they only get five days to live if they get infected...
                          A man who deemed to be an enemy of the state dares to cure this mess once and for all.

                          Meanwhile, on the other side of Britain another force is messing with the balance on Britain and eating away Britain from the inside, what could Britain do in this situation?

                          "Death is upon us and were just standing right in front of it..."

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