Cantiara Honestly? No. If you send an unpolished, amateur, poorly written and unedited work to a publishing company, they would outright reject your script. Hell, even polished, well-written and edited manuscripts are rejected by publishing companies because of the sheer volume of scripts they receive. What makes you think the company is obligated to provide a "package" from the house? That's just entitlement. Only professional writers whose manuscripts are accepted and recognized by editors are contacted and then they work with professional editors - and make no mistake, these professional editors' main role is not to proofread. Yes, they pick up grammar or spelling mistakes here and there, but that's the least important aspect of their job. Their real job is to work with the author on improving the plot, brainstorming the different directions the story can go (what, you think the editors are going to just say, yeah, write whatever you want?), discuss character development, spot inconsistencies and plot holes, etc. They are not perfect by any means, but they are still professionals. In any case, you are totally mistaken about the "publishing companies providing an editing package" thing. Most publishing companies don't even tell you that they reject your stories, which is why they include the caveat telling you that you're most likely not considered if you don't hear a reply from them in three months, and also that "because of the sheer number of manuscripts we receive, we will not be able to respond individually to each author to tell them the reasons for rejection." They literally receive hundreds, if not thousands of manuscripts a month, but have limited staff to go through all of them. Who's going to have the time to edit every single one of them? And it's not their job to provide the people who submit an editing software. You're the one applying to them and trying to appeal to them to "hire" you with your product. What makes you stand out from the others? For starters, if you don't even have the most basic grasp of grammar or have a very limited vocabulary, you're eliminated. You may think your ideas are brilliant or genius and you deserve a chance, but make no mistake, there are other authors who both have great ideas and can write very well. They're the ones who will catch the eye of the publishing company, not you. Quite frankly, the publishing companies would probably be looking for reasons to eliminate stories, not find one to publish. You want to talk about reality? That is reality.
You only receive those sort of services or "packages" when the publishing company deems you worthy enough of investment and recognizes you as a proper writer. If you're going to submit a sloppily written work that's incoherent and then expect them to provide an editing service or package, then...my friend, to put it bluntly, you are deluded.
If you go look for a job, you don't tell your interviewer and prospective employer that it's their job or obligation to train and help you. You'll get kicked out immediately. If you're applying for graduate school or a fellowship, you submit a polished and edited writing sample, not tell the professors or committee that it's their job to teach you to write one. Similarly, Qidian or writing websites merely host your stuff and provide you an opportunity to showcase your works and demonstrate why people should read your stories. If you can't write a proper story or if you don't have a good grasp of the language, then it's on you to learn how to write or master the language. Not Qidian to help you learn.
Now you might claim that my examples don't apply here because Qidian is "digital" or "online". That's nonsense. Obviously I don't go onto Syousetsuka ni Narou and demand that they provide some program that helps edit my horribly written Japanese. The users there would probably laugh and kick me out of the site for being so entitled. If I want to write a Japanese novel, I will have to learn Japanese, practice the language until I'm good at it, or get someone to teach me. Not expect Syousetsuka ni Narou or some Japanese writing website to provide me "services" - and for free too. Why should they waste their time, resources and money helping a nobody Gaijin like me with editing software when they have so many more local writers to worry about?