i checked it out....i must say that i think you idea is good but your literature needs some improving.....plus the summary could use a bit more detail

    BlackCarapace I read three chapters of your book and I'll write you a positive review. However, you should try to work on your writing- particularly the grammar.

    Seeing that english isn't your first language, then you're doing well. Just make sure to keep your pronouns straight. Ajie is a boy, I presume, but you called him "her" in chapter 3.

    The story is engaging enough so it has potential. I'll be making a review after posting this.

    Here's my novel for the swap.
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/15150519306304105/The-Day-You-Conquered-the-World

        5 days later

        BlackCarapace The description alone was actually quite intriguing. Your grammar could use some work, but your English is honestly quite good. I was able to follow along and understood what was happening. I especially like how you set up the basics of your fantasy world. You made your world stand out quickly.

        Dropping my novel here, but it's not as fantastical as yours.

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/15263708605662405/ChainLink%3A-Rewind

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