Here for my first ever asking for readers or fellow author's opinion about my work. If you think you have a unique story (i.e. no cliche CEOs story, no standard hero-wannabe isekai, no protagonist who think with his dck) feel free to ask me for review, and of course, I would be grateful if you can read some of my chapter and give me a review too. Do note that I tend to review harshly, I usually give a short essay on a review: points to improve and your strength, so don't hesitate to give me a similar kind of review.

Here it is:

Genre: Thriller

Synopsis:
Waking up in the middle of the night to get some water, William found out that the world around him has turned strange.

The city lights that he saw every night from his apartment room were all shut down as pitch black darkness blocked his views. Even the wind has stopped whistling through the balcony, whereas the sounds of a nearby construction site could no longer be heard.

He tried to turn on the lights to no avail and when he tried to wake up his roommate, he found out that he was not in his room.

"What the heck?"

Just as he wondered what was going on, a silver-bordered screen appeared in front of his eyes.

[Host detected. Begin task...]

[1. Survive the nightmare]
[2. Escape the apartment]

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Not ready for scary stuff? No problem, I have another one here (more chaps, but on hiatus)

    Exalted Warlock
    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13219997806168505/Exalted-Warlock
    Synopsis: Magnus Clade was a young man back on Earth, filled with hopes and dreams. That is until everything that tied him to Earth was taken and destroyed.

    One night tormented with grief and contemplating dark thoughts. He stumbled upon a mysterious black gem-like shard, that whisked him away to another world called, Pandora.

    A vast world part of the Great Known Cosmos.

      Abdirah101 I have given you several suggestions, I will be waiting for you to improve your masterpiece.

      LostInFictions I am sorry. Please come back when you have at least three chapters in. It will do you and others injustice if I left a review without being able to grasp the core of your story.

      Aysel_Inara Hi, I have left my review for you. Your work exceeds my expectation for an amazing first POV. Do take a look at my suggestions to improve your story even further!

        If you like xianxia check mine out! Its a classical style xianxia novel, but I put my own spin on the cultivation levels. Less just absorbing raw power, but actual explanation into what makes each level distinct and why. Also adding my own personal taste in how these daoist should actually be ascending to immortality (e.g building the spirit, taming their inner demons, what happens if your path has flaws or is incorrect...). Don't have alot of chapters out yet, but I will definitely build on it in the future!

        Title: Beyond The Primordials
        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15210648305420705
        Synopsis: When Yin Hui was born, the heavens trembled. Out of fear, the primordial gods crippled his clan and himself, stripping them of their ability to cultivate. Rendered powerless, his clan was driven to near extinction and Yin Hui was condemned to a life of slavery. After 15 years of servitude, he encounters a stroke of fortune that would change his fate forever, bestowing upon him an alternate method of cultivating. With a new lease on life, he exacts vengeance against all who wronged him, and strives to ascend beyond the primordials!

          A Science Fantasy story with Kingdom Building :
          Magical Cosmic
          Genre : Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Science Fiction
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/15032211506636005/Magical-Cosmic
          Sypnosis :
          Victor Petard Asterisk was just an explorer, like many others.
          Roaming the unknown part of the galaxy and seeking the answer to Humanity's loneliness among the stars.
          One day, he chanced upon an unnatural wormhole that brings him to another Universe.
          A Universe, full of magic and wonders.
          "Hah!! With my advanced technology, who could challenge me?"
          "You there, savages! Still using bows and swords? Better go back to farming in the countryside!"
          "And you! What's with that backward magic staff? Change with mine instead."
          With determination and experience as an explorer, Victor will once more explore the world while discovering the deeper mystery of the Universe.
          Follow Victor's journey, as he makes changes across the world and had his name rang throughout the Multiverse.
          Welcoming a review swap.

            alernatetext

            Pathway to Eternity

            ______________________________________________________________

            I know nothing, except the ignorance of my existence.

              Gayu2594 Whoa! I was not prepared to review a complete book, are you sure you want me to? It is too late to change anything, but I can still give you suggestions in the review if you want for the next time you write. How's that sound?

              Wayward_Scholar Ah, yours is a standard xianxia story. I have given you my review. Unfortunately I haven't read xianxia as of lately, so I didn't put anything much in it.

              BlackCarapace I have write a review. I don't know how to put this, but I found that my past writing style is pretty similar to yours, especially for the grammar struggles! Do give my work a look if you have time ;)

              Hiva_11 You... yours made me frustrated! Just... check out what I said in the review

                WWFire

                Yes, sir. I already saw your pointers about my work and will work on the suggestions regarding pause punctuation, soon. ❤ Thank you for the praise and motivating me to keep going.

                  After six months in a faerie death camp, Lady Railynn Leona Tal awaits her execution. The human kingdoms have gone too far, capturing fae to torture and kill them, only because they wield magic. With war on the horizon, the fae kingdoms must ally together. Putting differences aside, Railynn and her new allies must work together to fight off the invading humans and protect what is left of the magical realm. Even if it means Railynn must enter an arranged marriage to do so. But can she go through with it if her heart might belong to another?

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/15044243105575905

                    WWFire
                    I'm gonna join in on this. I don't usually like the common genres of books on the site so hopefully I'll be able to find a few off-beat ones here. Anyway, I'm going to do two of mine if that's okay

                    First one: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11799717406527805/book-3-Years-Later
                    Based 3 years after the zombie out break. It follows the story of a girl who struggles to make sense of what's left of the world and trying to fill the gaps in her memory before she succumbs to the harsh reality she lives in. There are themes of identity loss, conflicting morality, cruelty and, of course, gore.
                    I'm starting book 2 now so I would love to have a review.

                    Second: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11237922105308805/Input-Log-Dates
                    A collection of stories, ranging from log-dates to audio transcripts, about residents trying to survive the strange occurrences in the world they are placed in. Each volume is different but from the same world so feel free choose any volume to start on. There's alot of chapters but each one is very short, do note that some chapters try to emulate computer glitching so the writing may end up weird.

                      WWFire I'm interested in the review swap....

                      Mine is somewhat of an isekai setting, however, the MCs weren't hit by a truck or car, got summoned to be heroes, or were accidentally killed off by God. Instead, the world swap was caused by the rash, impulsive actions of a Prince, and his desperate friends and brother who tried to get him back and failed.

                      Link: Cross Worlds: The Tale of Two Boys Who Swapped Worlds
                      Genre: Fantasy/Action/Adventure
                      Synopsis:
                      Two worlds: Earth and Sekai—a world where magic and technology coexist.

                      Two boys—Tachibana Yuri. An ordinary Japanese boy with a normal life, and has a love for manga.
                      Yuri Tachibana. A rebellious, short-tempered Third Prince of the Saishi Kingdom. He's known notoriously for his recklessness and punk-like behaviour, the headache of the royal family.

                      What will happen when they accidentally switch worlds? Chaos and hilarity of course.

                        Hi WWFire
                        This is my new story book SILENCE : says it all
                        Link:
                        https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/15195572205365605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306606724

                        Synopsis:
                        After being framed and raped FIZA YAQUB, daughter of a famous lawyer WAZIB YAQUB came back from jail and was facing a new world. Now, she is slut slept with 3 men.
                        She was fighting with her menal illness, with her dark future when one day, she saw one of her rapists has been murdered.

                        Hope you will like it.

                          Title: The Emperor who loves me dearly

                          Sypnosis: Four empires, hundreds of Kingdom.

                          Among these, is the Theavarian Empire and the Thusha Kingdom, the exact opposites. One lives lavishly while the other is almost eradicated in the map due to its failure to keep up with modernization.

                          Theavarian empire who doesn't believe in love and treats it as a disease while Thusha Kingdom who sees love as their salvation.

                          This happened in a parallel universe where modern-day emperors still exist, making the role of CEO like those of an ant.


                          Can love really surpass all?

                          "We are the two paths that should never have crossed"-Unknown

                          "Falling in love with you is my biggest mistake, risking it all is my choice"- Celestia Wresea

                          If fate will tear you down, again and again, will you still fight even though you know that in this lifetime, you two can't be together?

                          This story revolves around the story of the loveless empire, the Theavarian and the humble kingdom of Thusha.

                          Can destiny be bent towards their way? Or it will consume both of them.

                          "Love me once, love me twice, love me thrice, love me forever"

                          Love me Harder Adam.

                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13849411906728605#contents

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