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Here for my first ever asking for readers or fellow author's opinion about my work. If you think you have a unique story (i.e. no cliche CEOs story, no standard hero-wannabe isekai, no protagonist who think with his dck) feel free to ask me for review, and of course, I would be grateful if you can read some of my chapter and give me a review too. Do note that I tend to review harshly, I usually give a short essay on a review: points to improve and your strength, so don't hesitate to give me a similar kind of review.
Here it is:
Genre: Thriller
Synopsis:
Waking up in the middle of the night to get some water, William found out that the world around him has turned strange.
The city lights that he saw every night from his apartment room were all shut down as pitch black darkness blocked his views. Even the wind has stopped whistling through the balcony, whereas the sounds of a nearby construction site could no longer be heard.
He tried to turn on the lights to no avail and when he tried to wake up his roommate, he found out that he was not in his room.
"What the heck?"
Just as he wondered what was going on, a silver-bordered screen appeared in front of his eyes.
[Host detected. Begin task...]
[1. Survive the nightmare]
[2. Escape the apartment]
Not ready for scary stuff? No problem, I have another one here (more chaps, but on hiatus)