SilentWhisperS from the way you type here, I can already see that you have spacing problems
WWFire
- Jul 26, 2020
- Joined Jan 3, 2019
Oh my beautiful sunshine
The forever light of my life
Where have you been all these time?
I've tread the world and the seven seas
All of that just to find you
But it doesn't matter now
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oof
Sorry mate, can't help it.
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Sigh... somehow I'm not that satisfied with my work yet. I may not even be in top 10 if I joined the other one. Welp, all the big fishes are in #89 :/
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Gayu2594 Whoa! I was not prepared to review a complete book, are you sure you want me to? It is too late to change anything, but I can still give you suggestions in the review if you want for the next time you write. How's that sound?
Wayward_Scholar Ah, yours is a standard xianxia story. I have given you my review. Unfortunately I haven't read xianxia as of lately, so I didn't put anything much in it.
BlackCarapace I have write a review. I don't know how to put this, but I found that my past writing style is pretty similar to yours, especially for the grammar struggles! Do give my work a look if you have time ;)
Hiva_11 You... yours made me frustrated! Just... check out what I said in the review
I dont think we can. I always upload to imgur first before sharing or tag a webnovel link for my cover
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Abdirah101 I have given you several suggestions, I will be waiting for you to improve your masterpiece.
LostInFictions I am sorry. Please come back when you have at least three chapters in. It will do you and others injustice if I left a review without being able to grasp the core of your story.
Aysel_Inara Hi, I have left my review for you. Your work exceeds my expectation for an amazing first POV. Do take a look at my suggestions to improve your story even further!
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Here for my first ever asking for readers or fellow author's opinion about my work. If you think you have a unique story (i.e. no cliche CEOs story, no standard hero-wannabe isekai, no protagonist who think with his dck) feel free to ask me for review, and of course, I would be grateful if you can read some of my chapter and give me a review too. Do note that I tend to review harshly, I usually give a short essay on a review: points to improve and your strength, so don't hesitate to give me a similar kind of review.
Here it is:
Genre: Thriller
Synopsis:
Waking up in the middle of the night to get some water, William found out that the world around him has turned strange.The city lights that he saw every night from his apartment room were all shut down as pitch black darkness blocked his views. Even the wind has stopped whistling through the balcony, whereas the sounds of a nearby construction site could no longer be heard.
He tried to turn on the lights to no avail and when he tried to wake up his roommate, he found out that he was not in his room.
"What the heck?"
Just as he wondered what was going on, a silver-bordered screen appeared in front of his eyes.
[Host detected. Begin task...]
[1. Survive the nightmare]
[2. Escape the apartment]Not ready for scary stuff? No problem, I have another one here (more chaps, but on hiatus)
From what I heard, the author has some troubles in the original site (QI) due to the censorship or whatever.
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First time I wrote a horror/thriller. I will appreciate if anyone can support me.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15194299506469705
tags: Male Protagonist, Magical Realism, Weak to StrongSynopsis:
Waking up in the middle of the night to get some water, William found out that the world around him has turned strange.The city lights that he saw every night from his apartment room were all shut down as pitch black darkness blocked his views. Even the wind has stopped whistling through the balcony, whereas the sounds of a nearby construction site could no longer be heard.
He tried to turn on the lights to no avail and when he tried to wake up his roommate, he found out that he was not in his room.
"What the heck?"
Just as he wondered what was going on, a silver-bordered screen appeared in front of his eyes.
[Host detected. Begin task...]
[1. Survive the nightmare
2. Escape the apartment]p.s. tell me if you want a proper review, I don't do a half-assed one
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You think that romance/CEO is already over rated, but don't you think that transmigration/reincarnation is already over rated too? Most top ML novel here are all about transmigration/reincarnation (isekai if you will), and of course, this includes harem/RPG-like system/hero wannabe
Not only that, but one person can spam reviews to one story as well
Michael_Perez_2778 here's the real author Reili
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Btw, it will be downloaded into ios as well. The reason that you cant see it is because of the different OS authority (go and research this yourself). Basically, ios will not allow you to access these "caches" and hidden storage, while in android, you can access these folders
Please know that this is normal for any website or application that ran ads, also related to cookies and cache. This is why when you clean your browser (history & cache) you can free up lots of storage. This method is used to prevent the lags the next time you enter the site/app (saving loading time). When you clean up the cache (i.e. this downloaded ads, cookies, etc), it will just download it again anyway.
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You shouldn't hope on gaining comments or rating fast without updating daily here; too much traffic and very minimum exposure of latest updates ("full support of new authors" is bullshit). Someone told me that she updated everyday until 30s chapters before getting her first comment. Even more, its the popular "Romance" genre
I got my first comment after 14 chapters and 24 followers. Not here though, on royalroad
Seriously? are you asking when the pirate site will upload daily in the official host site???