The_Canary

Left you a review also. If it sounded a bit harsh, then I apologize, but that was how I felt as I read through it.

5 days later

glaurunglives haha yeah!! I'm still not done with my reading tho :( pero this is a good one! First time ko makabasa ng ganitong format of a novel.

    Hello, new author here as well. Saw this post, and I'm also willing swap reviews, because I find myself lacking in them. Critics are also welcome. Just go easy on me, please! (T_T)

    Oh, and here's my story! :)

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/15393500605196005

    By the way, Sevy_Sev, are you a filipino? I'm at the first chapter of your story and I just saw Metro Manila! It's a nostalgic sight to read! :)

    (PS - Please don't read the 2nd author's note if you haven't read the chapter 1. It contains spoilers for it.)

      glaurunglives

      Sure, why not. I got time! :)

      Since it's long, I'll comment on every chapter, then do a review once I'm finished. It might take a while though, so I hope you don't mind if the review gets delayed. Or do you just want me to do a review of chapter 51-54 specifically?

        Regius_Sanguis just chapter 51-52 OR chapter 54 is fine. But you can go for all four - their fairly short chapters around 1800 words each. I'm just starting on your 2nd chapter

          Regius_Sanguis

          Done reviewing 4.4/5. Those were loooong chapters — and the read button took me straight to the prologue. I only got to read your notes afterward. It's a good read since I've been reading Tolkien and Rohan since I was in grade 5 — but it might be a bit overwhelming for xianxia readers who want a quick fix.

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