Left you a review also. If it sounded a bit harsh, then I apologize, but that was how I felt as I read through it.
Need review of my novel :) I can do swap review also
I would like to do a review swap as well.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15196756006479305/The-Elemental-Knights
CapTillon done posting my review :)
5 days later
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I'll write up a review. I'll read up to your latest 11th chapter
Maybe you can make a review of mine?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15150519306304105/The-Day-You-Conquered-the-World
Just chapter 51-53 would be fine.
Anyway, I'll start reading.
Edit : done reviewing.
glaurunglives okay will start reading now your novel
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The_Canary thanks.!
sa uulitin.
glaurunglives haha yeah!! I'm still not done with my reading tho :( pero this is a good one! First time ko makabasa ng ganitong format of a novel.
Buti nagustuhan mo. DM kasi ako sa d&d game namin kaya ganyan ako magsulat.
glaurunglives oohh. I'm also interested sa D&D. pero no experience :(
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Hello, new author here as well. Saw this post, and I'm also willing swap reviews, because I find myself lacking in them. Critics are also welcome. Just go easy on me, please! (T_T)
Oh, and here's my story! :)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15393500605196005
By the way, Sevy_Sev, are you a filipino? I'm at the first chapter of your story and I just saw Metro Manila! It's a nostalgic sight to read! :)
(PS - Please don't read the 2nd author's note if you haven't read the chapter 1. It contains spoilers for it.)
Hi Reg, How about swapping with me?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15150519306304105/The-Day-You-Conquered-the-World
could you just do a review of chapters 51-52 or maybe chapter 54.
Anyway, I'll start reading yours and I'll post the review in a few minutes
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Sure, why not. I got time! :)
Since it's long, I'll comment on every chapter, then do a review once I'm finished. It might take a while though, so I hope you don't mind if the review gets delayed. Or do you just want me to do a review of chapter 51-54 specifically?
Regius_Sanguis just chapter 51-52 OR chapter 54 is fine. But you can go for all four - their fairly short chapters around 1800 words each. I'm just starting on your 2nd chapter
Done reviewing 4.4/5. Those were loooong chapters — and the read button took me straight to the prologue. I only got to read your notes afterward. It's a good read since I've been reading Tolkien and Rohan since I was in grade 5 — but it might be a bit overwhelming for xianxia readers who want a quick fix.
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Okay, thanks for the clarification. I'll go and read your story now and post my own thoughts about it as well.
And thanks for the review and the comments, I appreciate them because it gave me a different perspective. Also, you catch on quick. Yes, I stylized the story that way on purpose because my ideas came from western books and Japanese Light Novels! I'm happy you took notice of that! :)
Anyways, how does the ratings here work? Does it have something to do with the reviews to make it appear or something? And is your story set in the MC's POV? It's quite interesting.
Regius_Sanguis It's 2nd person — so technically, you are the MC. but yes, MCs POV.
You need to go to the "About page" of the novel — you can leave a review from there.
Regius_Sanguis yes I'm a Filipino!! :) Are you Filipino also? Or visited the Philippines before?
Done posting my review via chapter comment. Will wait for the succeeding chapters so I can provide my full review. But so far so good!! And you surprised me there with the intrusion of Fate Universe or Nasuverse!! I love all their series!!!
Kay, I just finished reading the specified chapters. I went from 51-54 chapters. I was about to go the 55, but I didn't want to keep you waiting. Overall, it's a good read. Gives me the Tolkien vibes, which I like!
Denton is an ass though, he's certainly not the MVP of the month. Can't say I blame him of being scared for his life in that situation. XD
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Hehe, I'm a Filipino as well. Proud to be, actually! Mabuhay ka, for creating a unique story. I'm still reading your story, actually. Hope you don't mind if gets delayed for a bit, but I'll make sure to comment on every chapter of your story and then post up a review. Salamat for reading my story, I appreciate it! :)
Also, please look forward to it once I release the next chapter next week. I'm still working on it, actually. I'd be most grateful if you continue to support the story then and after that! :)
Regius_Sanguis no problem. Take your time reading the story. Please do note that I haven't proofread yet my work so please bear with me. Hehehe
Don't worry. I added your novel to my library. Genuinely, I'm excited what servants will appear in your novel.