Hello, new author here as well. Saw this post, and I'm also willing swap reviews, because I find myself lacking in them. Critics are also welcome. Just go easy on me, please! (T_T)

Oh, and here's my story! :)

https://www.webnovel.com/book/15393500605196005

By the way, Sevy_Sev, are you a filipino? I'm at the first chapter of your story and I just saw Metro Manila! It's a nostalgic sight to read! :)

(PS - Please don't read the 2nd author's note if you haven't read the chapter 1. It contains spoilers for it.)

    glaurunglives

    Sure, why not. I got time! :)

    Since it's long, I'll comment on every chapter, then do a review once I'm finished. It might take a while though, so I hope you don't mind if the review gets delayed. Or do you just want me to do a review of chapter 51-54 specifically?

        Regius_Sanguis just chapter 51-52 OR chapter 54 is fine. But you can go for all four - their fairly short chapters around 1800 words each. I'm just starting on your 2nd chapter

            Regius_Sanguis

            Done reviewing 4.4/5. Those were loooong chapters — and the read button took me straight to the prologue. I only got to read your notes afterward. It's a good read since I've been reading Tolkien and Rohan since I was in grade 5 — but it might be a bit overwhelming for xianxia readers who want a quick fix.

                Okay, thanks for the clarification. I'll go and read your story now and post my own thoughts about it as well.

                And thanks for the review and the comments, I appreciate them because it gave me a different perspective. Also, you catch on quick. Yes, I stylized the story that way on purpose because my ideas came from western books and Japanese Light Novels! I'm happy you took notice of that! :)

                Anyways, how does the ratings here work? Does it have something to do with the reviews to make it appear or something? And is your story set in the MC's POV? It's quite interesting.

                  Regius_Sanguis It's 2nd person — so technically, you are the MC. but yes, MCs POV.
                  You need to go to the "About page" of the novel — you can leave a review from there.

                      Regius_Sanguis yes I'm a Filipino!! :) Are you Filipino also? Or visited the Philippines before?

                      Done posting my review via chapter comment. Will wait for the succeeding chapters so I can provide my full review. But so far so good!! And you surprised me there with the intrusion of Fate Universe or Nasuverse!! I love all their series!!!

                          glaurunglives

                          Kay, I just finished reading the specified chapters. I went from 51-54 chapters. I was about to go the 55, but I didn't want to keep you waiting. Overall, it's a good read. Gives me the Tolkien vibes, which I like!

                          Denton is an ass though, he's certainly not the MVP of the month. Can't say I blame him of being scared for his life in that situation. XD

                              The_Canary

                              Hehe, I'm a Filipino as well. Proud to be, actually! Mabuhay ka, for creating a unique story. I'm still reading your story, actually. Hope you don't mind if gets delayed for a bit, but I'll make sure to comment on every chapter of your story and then post up a review. Salamat for reading my story, I appreciate it! :)

                              Also, please look forward to it once I release the next chapter next week. I'm still working on it, actually. I'd be most grateful if you continue to support the story then and after that! :)

                                  Regius_Sanguis no problem. Take your time reading the story. Please do note that I haven't proofread yet my work so please bear with me. Hehehe

                                  Don't worry. I added your novel to my library. Genuinely, I'm excited what servants will appear in your novel.

                                      The_Canary

                                      It's okay. I don't mind the errors like word spelling and such. I was once like that too, then I simply got better by reading a lot of books and whatnot. What matters the most for me is the story's plot, creativity, world building and the lure of the story. So far, yours is doing a good job despite its flaws. It reminded me of the apocalyptic world of God Eater and 'Only I Level Up', what with the way monsters suddenly appeared.

                                      Just pour your heart and soul into the story, and I'm sure you'll do fine! :)

                                      Thanks for adding my story in your library, and for the stone as well. It tells me that you really enjoyed it, despite the lack of chapters. I'm glad to see that another reader has enjoyed my first official story! :)

                                        The_Canary Yeah, G's right. It can help you a lot, and I recommend keeping a dictionary with you as well, It is a very handy thing to have. It's your friend when you need to use alternative words to describe something! :)

                                        Also, look into more mythological monsters in the web. They can help you expand the story and world building!

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