kazesenken I try to be objective about myself and others. Therefore, I really appreciate my novel, the content is solid, but the text of the presentation and grammatical errors spoil the matter. My English has become a little better in eight months, but it is still far from good. I hope to make some money and, at the end of the novel, give it to the editor or translator if I write the novel in my native language. But I appreciate your honest opinion about my romance. Now I’m just rewriting the chapters in my last novel about treasure hunters. One kind reviewer told me to use the emotion tesarius, to use less and, for, but, it seems, the text has become easier, more interesting.

Thanks.

LostInFictions Thanks a lot! I have many ideas, a lot of historical information, I wanted to share with it. But my English is not very good. Now I have 6 novels, but these are not so many novels as thoughts, ideas, flow.

The first novel is still frozen, there are ideas, but I can’t translate them into words.

The second novel is about a farmer - I have agricultural knowledge, I have been engaged in agribusiness for two years. But so far I can’t get out of the trap that I created for myself. The main character is stuck in the city and can not go to the farm.

The third - fourth and fifth novels are still raw.

I would like if you have some time to watch my sixth novel, about treasure hunters. I’m just rewriting it now, “The Adventures of Treasure Hunters”.

So far I have rewritten 4 chapters, and 2 chapters (5 and 6) are old, but I will rule them today.

This novel, new, will not have many pages to read, I would be glad if you told me what else to pay attention to. And they gave your honest look at the novel.

Thanks a lot!

        OJROMANCE

        Please, yourself a favor and stop. Sincerely, one writer to another, I've seen careers ended by less. I understand you're frustrated, but you instigated this, and keep stirring it back up. Just let it go. You dont have to have people agree with you. Let them roll off your back and focus on writing and improving your craft.

            OJROMANCE Never talked about another author's work, so... Okay. Never lied about your book... Sooo... Okay

            Never even mentioned your name, You did that.
            Was I talking about you... HELL YES, I was. As is my right. When a trash ass human being, such as yourself, can delete and alter someone else's post, I have a right to be mad.

            Here's a bit of advice for you, grow up. Stop being such a discusting, vile, waste of oxygen. For you attack people with no idea what the hell they were actually saying, just shows your lack of morals, and common Sense. We were all having civilized discussion before you barged in with over the top and uncalled for display of nothingness. You're right I did call your book rapey, does not mean I said he raped her, look it up. And thank you, I always give honest reviews.

                To everyone who came to the conclusion thread, I deeply apologize for the toxic direction it had taken, I will be contacting webnovel to let them know

                  OJROMANCE
                  It looks like my hunch was right, you either don't know enough english to write a story, or you run everything through google translate. I said I go to a gynecologist, yet you called me a man...
                  You're embarassing yourself, and you never responded to my review? I read to chapter 51? Is my review valid? I'm going to post the review onto your book later, lets see if it stays up, since you don't delete reviews.
                  You're so immature that when the OP says that she started this thread because she was just venting and to not really take it seriously. Frustrated that someone who posts a book publicly could have such a fragile ego, and would harass OP to take it down because it was 'wrong.'
                  Just because someone is talking about you, doesn't mean you should pop in with insults and gatekeeping, especially when I know kindergardeners who can write better stories, and unlike you, when they don't know what a word means they ask for help.
                  Your book is only popular because its tags (they're wrong, its not non fiction or contemperary romance), its title (Viiiiiirrrrrrggggiiiiiinnnnnnnn), and its rating. (the secks l m f a o)
                  Grow up, and when you finally do, understand that you're not above anyone's help.
                  Cringe.

                      My god... these women are just ok with a bad book as long as it gets them horny.... I should write a rapey toxic romance.... brb

                        as a fellow contracted author. I will review this book for myself and see. I'll be fair about it. But based on the synopsis, the title - and what I've heard so far my impression isn't good here.

                        OJROMANCE 😅 You've reviewed one of my books before. So I'd like to be fair here, but your replies to everyone have come across as rude. Negative reviews happen - the people here gave your book a chance. They don't like it. It would have looked better if you kept the review there. I know it looks bad for your stats - but you can't expect everybody to like your work. As a author you have to keep in mind people like different genres. They may or may not agree with what you've written.

                          Clowniac
                          I should start writing romance. I'm looking for an editor clown, you in?

                              Clowniac
                              Genre: Historical Romance
                              Place: Korea
                              Synopsis:
                              AhnAhn was royal property. A prize won when her father's coup against the emperor failed. Her mother and older brother were spared on one condition: if AhnAhn married the emperor's blind son Wulin.
                              Wulin was a curious young man, the product of the emperor and a concubine. He was pushed aside, forgotten and spurred by many within. But being the emperor's son, he was well trained in martial arts, his blindless amplifying his senses. He found his fun blending amoungst the common folk. Every night dressing up as a poor man, a common man, a noodle seller and the like.
                              Currently, he had the most fun disguising himself as a thief, he and his gang robbing carriages by candlelight.
                              Tonight, was the night AhnAhn would be delivered to the royal palace, and tonight AhnAhn's carriage was in his sights...

                              Good, bad?

                                I have sent an email to WB and now I'm just waiting for a response back... If they even send one

                                  Lilliny Aw, sorry. No, of course, you're not. Didn't I tell you about Fiverr? If you were chopped liver, I wouldn't have even bothered posting that suggestion :sweat_smile:

                                  But tell you what, give me your discord link too, I'll see if there's something I could do.

                                      Lilliny This reminds me of what happened with another author and his story (it's a cultivation story). The moment someone posts a low-rating review with some criticism, all his readers jumped onto him and basically start harassing, heckling and condemning him until he deletes the review.

                                      Thanks to that, the story has a perfect rating of 5.0 even after 58 ratings. Now, the story itself isn't bad, and is actually well written, to be honest, but...I'm not sure if it's fair to go knock down reviewers and harass them if they write a critical or low-scoring review. It seems pretty dishonest. I don't think it's the author's fault even, it's his rabid fans that actually do it, so don't blame the author. Hell, these fans actually go onto other cultivation stories, downvote them (give them one star ratings and reviews) and criticize them. I don't know if it's real, but apparently they do that so that their favorite author and his book can artificially get above them in the rankings, but I don't think that's how rankings work in Webnovel because that's usually Power Stones (that said, that's how it works in Royal Road, I believe?).

                                          Tomoyuki wow, that's wrong, people should have the right to post honest reviews even if it is a bad one. As long as they are being respectful

                                              Tomoyuki
                                              I looked at the big three harassers accounts, and I'm pretty sure they're sock puppets.
                                              It was funny, they said that I'm a liar and that I twisted things, but when I asked what, they ignored my question or said that the Emperor didn't kill her family.
                                              Was the tone of my review rude? Yes, but not so rude that it was just bullying. I gave examples that showed that I had read as far as I claimed, and I calmy replied to their bashing with kindness.
                                              I have no reason to delete my review, and the author says they don't, so it should stay up, hehe.

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