LostInFictions Nobody was reading it except the guy who told me to delete it, so it's no big loss.
I look forward to your updates! Hmm, I thought your first chapter seemed fine to me. I like Evelyn as a character, and you really put in a lot of detail into her perspective and offered us readers a glimpse of her daily life (or job), and the emotional/psychological obstacles that she is currently facing. But that's just me.