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BhupendraGanvir Did you upload the chapters at once or over time like in daily releases? Readers here seem to like seeing daily releases or at least some regular release rate of chapters.
As MotivatedSloth has said. A good cover and summary is also key to hooking in readers.
If you're new to creative writing, getting some feedback is a good idea. You can achieve this by participating in "swap review" threads. Another writer should be able to give you some points of impressions.