blankkarma I am up for it my one is called The Runaway Demon King
If u r up for it just reply
blankkarma I am up for it my one is called The Runaway Demon King
If u r up for it just reply
Gourmet_DAO Hey ursus u want to swap a review
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16614543306695105/False-Aisle
Title: False Aisle
Genre: Fantasy / Adventure
Synopsis:
Marvis ‘Furlock’ Asharion was born as a healer class in a wrong family and a wrong kingdom. Asharion Family is known for being the best of ‘Warrior’ Class in the kingdom even the other kingdom feared the Noble named of Asharion. The Kingdome of Aserian where Marvis was born loathed and shunned the healer class for a reason.
Marvis was abandon secretly but his grandparents took care and supported him the family was against because he was a ‘Mistake’ in the Bloodline of Asharion. They decided of changing his surname and pretending that he didn’t exist in the family. He grew up as a fine man in the kingdom pretending to be a weakling mage, but he decided to go to an adventure in order to learn to become a good healer.
Little did he know even his a healer a ‘Warrior’s blood’ still through to his vein.
(If you want to swap review feel free to reply on this comment or inbox me. Thank you!!)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16560661005386305/Wild-Young-Miss%3A-Mister%2C-Let's-Kiss!
Title: Wild Young Miss: Mister, Let's Kiss!
Genre: Contemporary Romance
Synopsis:
Money, power, and influence, Zoey Zhou had it all… or, does she?
Zoey Zhou, a 28-year-old self-established businesswoman whose only talent was to earn money and to earn even more. As a woman whose years were spent chasing those money signs, Zoey had nearly forgotten that her exciting prime years was nearing its end.
The reason why she had gone in search of her companion for life. However, how could a 28-year-old desperate woman find her soulmate if the greatest hurdle was Zoey, herself?
Was it because of her standards? Heck, no! She has no standard at all! Then why, you ask?
Well, it was because of one simple reason: Zoey was particularly attracted to men who were not interested in her! And to makes things worse? She loses interest once the feelings had been reciprocated!
What would happen if the desperate and narcissist drama queen Zoey becomes the heroine of the mysterious and the weirdest man on earth?
Will spring come forth? Or, just another disaster will ensue?
***IM willing to do a review swap (I prefer romance but any genre is welcome and I will still give a honest review)
Um... ᛁ would like people to read this but reviews are cool too. Also, can ᛁ get a skilled artist to make me a cover? ᛁ just tweaked a preset.
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Action/Romance
Synopsise: Markus Purefeather is an ex-angel that got banished from Heaven and got reincarnated as a 16-year-old boy in a fantasy world. After meeting a mysterious girl named Myu and joining the adventures guild things go from bad to worst as both God and Lucifer make plans to make his immortal life on earth a living hell.
Heres the cover:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16607976705545805
ReincarnatedSaint yup, already done! interesting story !
Gourmet_DAO I'm in the process of writing the next chapter but ᛁ just wanted peoples opinions of the current chapter
Gourmet_DAO I'm sorry to have offended you but this is a work of my imagination there for a work of fiction and as long as I enjoy my writing as well as others ᛁ am satisfied. Again I state that my novel is set in a world of fiction and I have zero intentions of bringing real-world religion into my works to me in this world Lucifer and God are just omnipotent beings who are the face of good and evil.
huskybreed Hey I am up for a review swap.
Just reply me if u want.
ReincarnatedSaint Sure ᛁ can do a review swap. Oh sorry, ᛁ just realized that you weren't talking to me :)
ReincarnatedSaint
Yeah sure willing to review swap.
Can i have the link of the story?
Eiffel_Olympus It's called The Runaway Demon King
Eiffel_Olympus It's called The Runaway Demon King
I will be going to look at your one then
Got it and thanks!
ReincarnatedSaint can you do a review of my first two chapters also I'm almost done with the 3rd so can ᛁ get your opinion?
fraftlle oh yeah sure, you can check mine too.
The Runaway Demon King
fraftlle This is your world, your opinion, you are an author, you have your own background, your own ideas about the world. What can I say, do you want to write. If you have another novel on a different topic except for LGBT people, I will be happy to write a review for you.
Gourmet_DAO Maybe sometime in the future but right now I plan on writing Markus's story
fraftlle Hey I am done, I will post it on both places so you don't need to worry about it.
Well, you have got a story and I think being able to post one already takes a lot of courage.
But from what I read until now, I think you need to improve your writing.
The way your lines and sentences are arranged are confusing sometimes.
Next thing is my personal opinion, try to use onomatopoeia.
And if u wanna improve then never drop ur novel.
Good luck.
ReincarnatedSaint Yea I understand my lining is confusing I'm having a hard time getting everything lined up nicely.