Gourmet_DAO I'm sorry to have offended you but this is a work of my imagination there for a work of fiction and as long as I enjoy my writing as well as others ᛁ am satisfied. Again I state that my novel is set in a world of fiction and I have zero intentions of bringing real-world religion into my works to me in this world Lucifer and God are just omnipotent beings who are the face of good and evil.

      ReincarnatedSaint Sure ᛁ can do a review swap. Oh sorry, ᛁ just realized that you weren't talking to me :)

          fraftlle This is your world, your opinion, you are an author, you have your own background, your own ideas about the world. What can I say, do you want to write. If you have another novel on a different topic except for LGBT people, I will be happy to write a review for you.

              fraftlle Hey I am done, I will post it on both places so you don't need to worry about it.

              Well, you have got a story and I think being able to post one already takes a lot of courage.

              But from what I read until now, I think you need to improve your writing.

              The way your lines and sentences are arranged are confusing sometimes.

              Next thing is my personal opinion, try to use onomatopoeia.

              And if u wanna improve then never drop ur novel.

              Good luck.

                  fraftlle well if u r having that problem, then find a novel written in litRPG style like yours and observe the work

                      RenuKakkar yeah, I did it.

                      And I remember. You didn't reply me when I asked for the link. So don't blame me.

                      And u don't need to worry about this stuff.

                      With that good of a story and narrating skills. You just need to keep writing

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