It is just a suggestion.

It would to nice to have a list of novels and its author listed in one document and when the list is posted, authors can go and pick the books they want to read and point out the errors. It would give an opportunity for everyone’s work to be checked out and no one would get missed out!!

I feel that not everyone will know what all are the novels applied for spirity awards.

I saw someone( @RachelRuth )collecting the data in review swap forum, if he is ok with it, then we can use that list...

    Overlord_Venus Im confused. Is this synopsis or first chapter ╮(′～‵〞)╭

    No1 was able to post and then you posted the edit thingie once she posted, so what r we suppossed to do now?

    Also I don't like romance novels typically so Ill wait till some1 else posts. I'll hop on the train once there's a non romance/videogame novel

        Overlord_Venus The first chapter is a prologue, so yeah it is quite different from my other chapters. I am going with the fairytale theme for the story, so it is a bit different from my usual writing style. But thank you so much for your comments, I will definitely take them into account when writing further into the story!

        Also I want to comment on someone's story, and read other's stories if possible. I don't care about the theme, as I personally write both male lead and female lead novels, so I hope someone will comment soon so that I can check their novels out :D

          JKaiya you can also post suggestions for the same book. Once you are done, you can ask suggestions for chapter 1 of your spirity entry.

            Title: Forsaken By Love
            Author: Tinalynge @Tinalynge

            Typo: No typos found. Good job!

            Verbs: I suggest that you double-check your passive verbs and replace them with strong words. “There is no such thing as good writing, only good rewriting.”― Robert Graves

            The Author already noted that she'd edit it again. So, please don't forget to choose words that keep the story moving.

            Sentence Structure: Original [Being stabbed in the back, and dying all alone, the hacker He Lixue suddenly found herself in the room of the princess, in the body of the princess, and for some weird reason, she had gained all her memories.]

            Rewritten [Stabbed in the back and dying alone, the hacker He Lixue then found herself in the room and body of the princess. And for some weird reason, she gained all her memories.]

            Dialogues: No dialogues in this chapter

            Logical Errors: Found none, but the flow of narration can still improve by removing passive verbs.

            Hoping this could be of help to you! I'm looking forward to the brilliant mind that will review my work.

            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/16708176405923905/THE-LAST-DRAGON-HUNTER

              QuidSevilla Awesome, thank you! Now let us try and give you some feedback:

              Title: The Last Dragon Hunter
              Athor QuidSevilla @QuidSevilla

              Typos: I don't think there are any? I did not notice them at least.

              Verbs: Only thing that jumped out to me was the sentence: "They had raided the dungeon for three hours without rest, and they're lucky to survive the massacre" I would say "they were lucky to survive the massacre" but that is the only change I would make in the entire prologue :D

              Sentence structure: Quite good, I liked the flow of the story. There is a hook, and one gets to wonder who this Dragon hunter is. Also sometimes I found a few words interrupted my reading, not because they were incorrect, just because I needed to remember their meaning. But that could be due to English not being my first language. A few examples would be: "hundreds of disfigured humans and trolls littered the floor," here i would have used covered instead of littered "a kneeling short-haired woman gilded in knight-armor said" i would have used clad in or wearing. since Gilded is covered in something thin as far as I remember, and an armor tends to be quite heavy?

              Dialogue: Interesting! Very good at bringing more life to the story, I really liked it.

              Logical Errors: I found none. It was quite a good beginning with a good hook and very nicely written! Keep up the good work :D

                  QuidSevilla Pointed out one in a paragraph comment. Moreover, your tenses are not consistent and shift from past to present in the same paragraph/sentence. Try to be consistent with them and use past tenses — recommended for third person pov.

                      QuidSevilla Hello there! I did not find much errors in the first chapter other than a couple of tense errors here and there. I did drop by some suggestions. Do let me know once you have seen them so that I would delete it because there is no point of keeping them after the purpose is served. All the best.

                          QuidSevilla At the said (I suggest changing that as it sounds weird, but also weird if you delete said which makes it weird. The first part makes me feel off) age of dragon extinction, Vance Valfern, an orphan and infamous thief in the Kingdom of Soden, (you are probably adding comma because of how you are speaking in your mind, but this is most likely removed) finally ended up in prison. As punishment for his crimes, (same thing) the king’s counselors enlisted him to a tournament of death.

                          In his fight for survival, (same thing) he learned about his ancestry—he's the last of the fabled “dragon hunters.” (This is a title [if it wasn't you wouldn't have quoted it, like saying the King, not just king], not just a profession, so should be capitalized) With his true identity revealed, the king offered him a pardon. In exchange, (same thing) he must join a treasure hunt in a (suggest putting the for the following suggestion) lost island called Aragon(,) (remove after) or “the dungeon of dragons.” (the Dungeon of Dragons; or the Dragon Dungeon.)

                          Together with a quirky group of hunters, he must uncover his past, find the ancient artifact, and survive the dangers of his uncharted exploration—all of these in the name of truth and freedom.

                          I also suggest not making title all caps as it might turn away some readerse, but just a preference thing

                              QuidSevilla I ignored suggestions and comma edits but anyways I saw no typos. Just be careful of commas as sometimes you add them when it shouldn't be there, if you want to force the pause in the sentence when comma doesn't fit, just end the sentence or use something else like … -. Additionally when You start off a sentence like "S-sir" you do "S-Sir" you still capitalize because its the first word. There were 2 mistakes using that. Lastly be careful of your conversations as I spotted one case where He cried in tears as he laughed, "Derp" you put a period when that case should've been a comma because you ended the sentence with laughed which is like spoke plus the sentence was structured that he was about to speak. So that's basically it.

                              Now here is mine
                              Contest Genre: Comey & Knights&Magic
                              https://www.webnovel.com/book/16712935405945405/Fortune-Divination
                              Ignore the synopsis and title as I am changing it later, just say stuff on c1, ty.

                                  JKaiya
                                  QuidSevilla

                                  If you start a sentence off with a stutter, you can have the second letter be uppercase or lowercase.
                                  "A-apples? N-no, thanks."

                                  or

                                  "A-Apples? N-No, thanks."
                                  Are both correct. The only time where you have to capitalize, would be the second 'I' in "I-I'd," because the capital 'I' has a special meaning in English.

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