RenuKakkar
I'd like to thank you for inviting me to the adventure of witnessing another realm of writing. A different style, I would never have picked up on my own.

Here as customary is the review as well:

I give 5 stars for everything except character design.
The content seems great, well laid and thought out. What am I rooting for who am I rooting for is the questions that pop into my mind.

I logically understand the quality of the text, but emotionally I can't get invested. It might just well be the style isn't fit for me.

Maybe I'd like in this instance a few chapters with more character. More action around the characters and how they react to the world. See what makes them tick.

Overall I thank you for being able to see another side of writing that I don't usually visit. It has been a great learning experience. I wish you all the luck in the world.

      BlueSilk Thanks again. I have reviewed your book.

      There is no point in my replicating what I wrote as review points here also.

          This is my cousins work. Hope you all encourage it.

          Novel name:Reborn princess:I will change my ill-fate
          Novel link:https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16985660505026705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4308050433

          Synopsis:
          "Today we are gathered here for the execution of former princess, Aeinshia Rutz, in the crime of misleading the authorities, attempt to murder of princess Lily and the murder of the almighty emperor of the kingdom" the royal announcer yelled from the middle of the execution grounds.

          Aeinshia Rutz, the once apple of everyone's eye was now the unimaginable traitor of the kingdom, who killed the Emperor, her own uncle who treated her greater than anyone in this world.

          "I didn't do anything wrong. I'm not guilty for the Emperor." Were the last words Aeinshia spoke before she was charged of horrendous crime one can ever commit towards their kingdom.

          ......

          "No. Absolutely not. My princess Aeinshia would never do that." the Prince of the kingdom growled towards his most dedicated guard and friend.

          "Your highness, the evidences are all clear and the princess didnt give out her words", the guard replied. Even he believed princess Aeinshia would never commit such grave a mistake but, all the evidences are pointed at her. There's no way she could escape the trap she fell.

          "Why are you doing this, my love? How am I going to survive without you? Even though you had no will to live ,atleast you should have thought about me . I loved you for my entire life. I am the future king,yet I cannot save my own love. I am useless. But, I will definitely prove your innocence no matter what it takes." Prince Evan thought before leaving off the execution grounds.

          ......

          "Is this how my life is going to end? Where did it go wrong? Where did I loose control of my own life? Was I too selfish to wish for love from my prince?" These were the questions going on in her head .

          Both of them longed for each other. But years of misunderstandings lead them to not to discover their love for each other.

          'Can't i get a second chance?' was the last thought she had before the crowd roared when head of the traitor was beheaded.

          So, the chance was given.

          The cycle was reversed, time was turned around, a chance came and the princess was reborn.

          Will the Reborn Princess stop the ill fate or this rewinded cycle will be far more worse due to the tangles of love and thirst for power?

            This is my cousins work. Hope you all encourage it.

            Novel name:Reborn princess:I will change my ill-fate
            Novel link:https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16985660505026705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4308050433

            Synopsis:
            "Today we are gathered here for the execution of former princess, Aeinshia Rutz, in the crime of misleading the authorities, attempt to murder of princess Lily and the murder of the almighty emperor of the kingdom" the royal announcer yelled from the middle of the execution grounds.

            Aeinshia Rutz, the once apple of everyone's eye was now the unimaginable traitor of the kingdom, who killed the Emperor, her own uncle who treated her greater than anyone in this world.

            "I didn't do anything wrong. I'm not guilty for the Emperor." Were the last words Aeinshia spoke before she was charged of horrendous crime one can ever commit towards their kingdom.

            ......

            "No. Absolutely not. My princess Aeinshia would never do that." the Prince of the kingdom growled towards his most dedicated guard and friend.

            "Your highness, the evidences are all clear and the princess didnt give out her words", the guard replied. Even he believed princess Aeinshia would never commit such grave a mistake but, all the evidences are pointed at her. There's no way she could escape the trap she fell.

            "Why are you doing this, my love? How am I going to survive without you? Even though you had no will to live ,atleast you should have thought about me . I loved you for my entire life. I am the future king,yet I cannot save my own love. I am useless. But, I will definitely prove your innocence no matter what it takes." Prince Evan thought before leaving off the execution grounds.

            ......

            "Is this how my life is going to end? Where did it go wrong? Where did I loose control of my own life? Was I too selfish to wish for love from my prince?" These were the questions going on in her head .

            Both of them longed for each other. But years of misunderstandings lead them to not to discover their love for each other.

            'Can't i get a second chance?' was the last thought she had before the crowd roared when head of the traitor was beheaded.

            So, the chance was given.

            The cycle was reversed, time was turned around, a chance came and the princess was reborn.

            Will the Reborn Princess stop the ill fate or this rewinded cycle will be far more worse due to the tangles of love and thirst for power?

                Title: Evolution: God's Trial

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/16934104806961005/

                Tags: Apocalypse, Evolution, Action, Adventure.

                Do give this novel a chance.

                I have just written the tenth chapter and now the novel has more than 15k words. Though right now, it's not really on the apocalypse side yet but more on the evolution... After a few chapters, the novel will be there.

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