If anyone wants to do a review swap with me, let me know. [Sorry, but I can only read max 6-7 chapter]
Here's Mine : https://www.webnovel.com/book/apaurushya_17255179105067905
Genre : Sci Fi, Fantasy

[I might also post some random advice here in comment section and would love it if you could do the same for me. ]

    victorines Posted my review check it out

    General advice
    Point 1: Cut off your paragraphs into pieces, and do it fast because readers might get scared. I can't stress enough about the importance of this.

    Point 2: (You have good vocab). So Keep thing variable, too much of complexity also turn off the readers. find a middle line.

    Point 3: Shorten the dialogue to only important things. For Ex:
    don't ->
    p1 - "Hi"
    p2 - "What's up?"
    p1 - "Nothing Much"
    P2 - "Oh! are you not in a good mood?"
    P1 - "No nothing, its nothing"
    P1 - "Tell me! is it about a boy?"

    do->
    p1 - "hi"
    p2 - "Wow... you look sullen!" She looked at him curiously."oh no... Is this about a boy?"

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