August 2020: Review Swap Here
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If anyone wants to do a review swap with me, let me know. [Sorry, but I can only read max 6-7 chapter]
Here's Mine : https://www.webnovel.com/book/apaurushya_17255179105067905
Genre : Sci Fi, Fantasy
[I might also post some random advice here in comment section and would love it if you could do the same for me. ]
Lizabelle88
done~ here is mine
https://www.webnovel.com/book/17554509105475505
Blackcrust
Let's review swap....mine is fantasy...I'll read up to 5 chapter of your story...
Here's mine...fantasy...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-tale-of-three-sisters_17036266206362705
victorines
Okay I will read yours...
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Done reviewing and commenting on the chapters of your novel!
Good luck and keep it up!
Done reviewing and commenting on the chapters. Well done! An amazing read!
victorines Posted my review check it out
General advice
Point 1: Cut off your paragraphs into pieces, and do it fast because readers might get scared. I can't stress enough about the importance of this.
Point 2: (You have good vocab). So Keep thing variable, too much of complexity also turn off the readers. find a middle line.
Point 3: Shorten the dialogue to only important things. For Ex:
don't ->
p1 - "Hi"
p2 - "What's up?"
p1 - "Nothing Much"
P2 - "Oh! are you not in a good mood?"
P1 - "No nothing, its nothing"
P1 - "Tell me! is it about a boy?"
do->
p1 - "hi"
p2 - "Wow... you look sullen!" She looked at him curiously."oh no... Is this about a boy?"
Blackcrust sure. Can I read 6-7 chapters only too?
Here's mine :
https://m.webnovel.com/book/17618662705841105?bookId=17618662705841105&activeTab=
Hello guys...midnight here...
I will review and comment up to 10 chapter on your novel.
Just leave a review and confirmed it here. I'll come back to you tomorrow...
Good night...sweet dreams everyone!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-tale-of-three-sisters_17036266206362705
Drapetomaniac12 Sure no problem, if possible I would recommend going till at least 4ch.
MokouFriedChicken
Okay thank you, I'll return the favor please be patient.
Lizabelle88 thanks! Really a lot of motivation for me XD
ForgottenLife Done with your review, it was a good read.
Drapetomaniac12 Sure, i will review yours tomorrow
Anyone up for a swap? I'll review yours tomorrow.
Here's mine if you are interested, thanks!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/my-long-lost-mate_17590521305675505