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My Mysterious Husband That's the name of a novel I can't To find it Please help me if you know it
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Title: The untold witch
Synopsis : Magic power!
Everyone wishes to have magic powers, especially evil ones and witches. If you are credited with malignant supernatural powers what are you going to do?
Those who do not believe in magic will never find it.
She found out a long time ago it's more fun having magic powers. She addressed herself with the name Witch. She shines in the day but for the nightโฆ
The greatest secrets are always hidden at night.
She can kill it. Of Course, She created it. But what if it doesn't die?
Let's find out her secret.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-untold-witch_17762117006893805
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I would gladly take the offer. Here is the link of my book. Thank you and I would gladly hear your suggestions and criticisms. :)
uniqueanime2 I'll take you up on your offer! Here's the link to my novel: https://m.webnovel.com/book/14820688106802605
uniqueanime2 Hi!!! Hope you're still giving out reviews. I really want people to give constructive criticism to my work! here's the link: Click here to read
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uniqueanime2 Hi there! Would you mind review my story? I would gladly hear from your opinions
Title: The Whisper In The Ice
Genre: Fantasy
Status: On-going
Synopsis:
In order to find her father who had disappeared since the age of 10, Roxie was sent by her mother to a special school far from her home. Due to she had already discovered her power, accidentally. In her new school, she met some great new friends, as well as new enemies. This made her distracted from the focus of her main goal, which was to find her father. But, with the help of her friends, she managed to get some information about him, along with a little sprinkle of adventure on the way.
Will Roxie ever find out about her father?
Link to it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-whisper-in-the-ice_17718418005514805
Done,uwu sorry for the wait also any other stories reply with your story link
Hey mate are you interested in history, politics, war & military?
If you are would you like to review mine? Thanks
https://www.webnovel.com/book/1453%3A-revival-of-byzantium_17554509105475505
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uniqueanime2 hereโs mine, Iโm open to blunt constructive criticism since I know it would help a lot when it comes to improving my story. TIA.
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๐๐ ๐๐จ๐๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฒ๐ญ๐ก๐ฌ
๐ถ๐๐๐๐: ๐ต๐๐๐๐๐๐ข, (๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐) ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐ฝ๐๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐-๐๐๐๐
๐๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ง๐'๐จ ๐ ๐ข๐ฎ๐ฉ๐, ๐๐ฉ ๐ข๐๐๐ฃ๐จ ๐๐ฉ'๐จ ๐ง๐๐๐ก. ๐ ๐ช๐จ๐ฉ ๐๐ค๐ง๐๐ค๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ฃ.
Cythera had many myths but there's always that myth. A story passed down from elders to their children until it became a myth.
Hidden in these lands, sleeps a woman. They call her Mistress of Cythera, said to have the magic of every element know; a gift from the goddess Cytheria Herself, they said. Some said she is the daughter of two higher Gods, Cytheria and Oikos but was given a task to heal the lands once it is needed.
Cytherians feared and worship her.
Said to have the fiercest auburn hair to have, a beauty that may rival the other Higher Goddesses, the Mistress helped Cythera thrived until she left. The people knew the reason why she left, they abused her powers, always calling for help but never thanking or heeding her advice until she grew tired of fixing every problem they have. Angered by their ignorance, it is said that the Mistress have decided to give judgement once she awakes.
The Elders have told their children to never disrespect the lands or face they wrath of the Mistress.
The stories being spread by the scholars that the Mistress hides and sleeps to regain her lost power but the others believed that she left because the Mistress didn't like what she saw in Cythera and returned to her parents.
But they didn't know she was waking.
๐ถ๐๐๐๐: ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ต๐๐๐๐๐๐ข, ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ด๐๐๐๐๐๐
๐ผ ๐ฌ๐ค๐ข๐๐ฃ ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ ๐๐ง๐๐๐ฉ ๐๐๐๐ช๐ฉ๐ฎ
Cerise is known for having an unearthly beauty in the paranormal community, men flocked to her in hopes of becoming hers, women either hate or want to be her. Beautiful women are dangerous, especially if there's a history she can not run from.
๐ผ ๐๐๐ฃ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ฉ ๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐ง๐๐๐ช๐๐จ ๐๐๐ง
Deimos, the King of Vampires has taken interest on the woman every man yearns for. Everything about her captivates him, even knowing this woman is dangerous to his kingdom, he wants her in his bed. She tempts him with her wicked smile, her touch seduces him, her entire presence sparks something dark in him.
๐ผ ๐๐๐๐ฉ๐๐ก๐ฎ ๐จ๐๐๐ง๐๐ฉ
Cerise has a dangerous past that she can not escape and now, it's catching up to her. All the work she created in the human realm are now being threatened by the very thing she fears. Her dangerous past has now entangled Deimos and Cerise needs to protect him before it's too late.
uniqueanime2 thx man! I really appreciate your review and I'm glad you liked my story!
uniqueanime2 Hey, could you check out my book, It currently has 12 chapters,
You can be honest with your critique because I really need to know what Im doing wrong and how can I improve.
My book https://www.webnovel.com/book/16991910705054005
Thanks
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mages-of-the-north%3A-the-adventure-begins_17791057805925605
Recommend going until at least chapter 7. Chapters are very short and to the point, averaging about 1.5K words.
Hi, I'd be thankful if you can check out my book. It's not the best, but I'd like to hear some insights on how I can improve, thanks.
Title: Lightning's Attraction
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/lightning's-attraction_17733820506737905
Synopsis: Pushed between two choices; A dead end and a promising future, Xing Zishen believes that he chose the right thing. Whereas his elders and fellow disciples who know nothing of him, nothing of his past, and nothing of the hole in his heart greatly disapproves.
*Sigh "Stick around for now. They'll think I've got you already."
Genre: Adventure, Cultivation, Bromance
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