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Title: The untold witch
Synopsis : Magic power!

Everyone wishes to have magic powers, especially evil ones and witches. If you are credited with malignant supernatural powers what are you going to do?

Those who do not believe in magic will never find it.

She found out a long time ago it's more fun having magic powers. She addressed herself with the name Witch. She shines in the day but for the nightโ€ฆ

The greatest secrets are always hidden at night.

She can kill it. Of Course, She created it. But what if it doesn't die?

Let's find out her secret.


Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-untold-witch_17762117006893805

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      uniqueanime2 Hi there! Would you mind review my story? I would gladly hear from your opinions

      Title: The Whisper In The Ice

      Genre: Fantasy

      Status: On-going

      Synopsis:

      In order to find her father who had disappeared since the age of 10, Roxie was sent by her mother to a special school far from her home. Due to she had already discovered her power, accidentally. In her new school, she met some great new friends, as well as new enemies. This made her distracted from the focus of her main goal, which was to find her father. But, with the help of her friends, she managed to get some information about him, along with a little sprinkle of adventure on the way.

      Will Roxie ever find out about her father?

      Link to it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-whisper-in-the-ice_17718418005514805

        uniqueanime2 hereโ€™s mine, Iโ€™m open to blunt constructive criticism since I know it would help a lot when it comes to improving my story. TIA.

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        ๐Ž๐Ÿ ๐†๐จ๐๐ฌ ๐š๐ง๐ ๐Œ๐ฒ๐ญ๐ก๐ฌ

        ๐™ถ๐šŽ๐š—๐š›๐šŽ: ๐™ต๐šŠ๐š—๐š๐šŠ๐šœ๐šข, (๐š‚๐š•๐š˜๐š  ๐š‹๐šž๐š›๐š—) ๐š๐š˜๐š–๐šŠ๐š—๐šŒ๐šŽ, ๐™ฝ๐šŽ๐š  ๐™ฐ๐š๐šž๐š•๐š ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐™ฐ๐š—๐š๐š’-๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›๐š˜


        ๐™„๐™› ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง๐™š'๐™จ ๐™– ๐™ข๐™ฎ๐™ฉ๐™, ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ข๐™š๐™–๐™ฃ๐™จ ๐™ž๐™ฉ'๐™จ ๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™ก. ๐™…๐™ช๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง๐™œ๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ฃ.


        Cythera had many myths but there's always that myth. A story passed down from elders to their children until it became a myth.

        Hidden in these lands, sleeps a woman. They call her Mistress of Cythera, said to have the magic of every element know; a gift from the goddess Cytheria Herself, they said. Some said she is the daughter of two higher Gods, Cytheria and Oikos but was given a task to heal the lands once it is needed.

        Cytherians feared and worship her.

        Said to have the fiercest auburn hair to have, a beauty that may rival the other Higher Goddesses, the Mistress helped Cythera thrived until she left. The people knew the reason why she left, they abused her powers, always calling for help but never thanking or heeding her advice until she grew tired of fixing every problem they have. Angered by their ignorance, it is said that the Mistress have decided to give judgement once she awakes.

        The Elders have told their children to never disrespect the lands or face they wrath of the Mistress.

        The stories being spread by the scholars that the Mistress hides and sleeps to regain her lost power but the others believed that she left because the Mistress didn't like what she saw in Cythera and returned to her parents.

        But they didn't know she was waking.


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        ๐™ถ๐šŽ๐š—๐š›๐šŽ: ๐™ฐ๐š๐šž๐š•๐š, ๐š„๐š›๐š‹๐šŠ๐š— ๐™ต๐šŠ๐š—๐š๐šŠ๐šœ๐šข, ๐š๐š˜๐š–๐šŠ๐š—๐šŒ๐šŽ ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐™ด๐š›๐š˜๐š๐š’๐šŒ๐šŠ

        ๐˜ผ ๐™ฌ๐™ค๐™ข๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™œ๐™ง๐™š๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™—๐™š๐™–๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™ฎ

        Cerise is known for having an unearthly beauty in the paranormal community, men flocked to her in hopes of becoming hers, women either hate or want to be her. Beautiful women are dangerous, especially if there's a history she can not run from.

        ๐˜ผ ๐™†๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ž๐™œ๐™ช๐™š๐™จ ๐™๐™š๐™ง

        Deimos, the King of Vampires has taken interest on the woman every man yearns for. Everything about her captivates him, even knowing this woman is dangerous to his kingdom, he wants her in his bed. She tempts him with her wicked smile, her touch seduces him, her entire presence sparks something dark in him.

        ๐˜ผ ๐™™๐™š๐™–๐™ฉ๐™๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™จ๐™š๐™˜๐™ง๐™š๐™ฉ

        Cerise has a dangerous past that she can not escape and now, it's catching up to her. All the work she created in the human realm are now being threatened by the very thing she fears. Her dangerous past has now entangled Deimos and Cerise needs to protect him before it's too late.

          Hi, I'd be thankful if you can check out my book. It's not the best, but I'd like to hear some insights on how I can improve, thanks.

          Title: Lightning's Attraction

          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/lightning's-attraction_17733820506737905

          Synopsis: Pushed between two choices; A dead end and a promising future, Xing Zishen believes that he chose the right thing. Whereas his elders and fellow disciples who know nothing of him, nothing of his past, and nothing of the hole in his heart greatly disapproves.

          *Sigh "Stick around for now. They'll think I've got you already."

          Genre: Adventure, Cultivation, Bromance

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              Firstly, I just want to appreciate the helping hand, which you are giving to those who are new and feel apprehensive, whether their work gets recognized or not...Thank you very much...

              Title: VOICE

              Genre: Romance, Drama, Modern.

              (https://www.webnovel.com/book/voice_17809065306148905)

              Synopsis:

              How a mere Voice, strikes a chord, in the heart of a person???

              Does love has any limit???

              What is his love story???

              P.S: This is my first story in webnovel, there are some grammar mistakes, which I will proofread .

                Try mine? Sorry if theres a jump but it should suffice.

                Title: The Arks
                Genre: Fantasy

                Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/14083245205276005

                In this universe, those who can manipulate certain Elements were called 'Mages'. From Water to Fire, and even Time itself, these Mages were bred in all corners of the Universe.

                Each planet created are known for their distinct Elements.

                  For everyone above this message I am currently working on yours๐Ÿ‘†for everyone below you can leave a link or reply so I can review your stories๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿ‘‡๐Ÿ‘‡

                    Path of Supreme Being

                    Genre: Fan-Fiction, System, MCU, Marvel, Cold-Blooded MC, Timeskip

                    Synopsis

                    I am Alex Horton.

                    Something unexpected happened in my life, things that I don't know that actually exist.

                    I'm just living my life as normal as always, I'm actually doing a magnificent job fending off for myself without relying on others.

                    But the moment I got home, I felt unbearable pain in my head and fell unconscious.

                    The moment I woke up, I'm already in a different place. I didn't know where or how did I come here when suddenly I heard a mighty and pleasant voice.

                    "Unfortunately, you died," Then God said.

                    "..."

                    Well, this is just the start of my story. What could happen, right?

                    Come and join me on this journey.

                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/path-of-supreme-being_17803268105985805

                      Blurb : How does it feel, when you canโ€™t be who you are in front of others? How does it feel when you ask yourself who you are but you have no answer to give yourself? What do you think, when you canโ€™t think of anything else but the but the anger and betrayal youโ€™ve been through? What you speak, when you donโ€™t have anything to say? What do you do, when you donโ€™t know where to go? All these questions raised inside the mind of Diana but she wasn't the kind to suppress the questions her mind raises and so she went to seek her answers. To find her past. To find herself.

                      An orphan becoming adopted, him becoming a billionaire. Woman at his feet. People there right at his whim to serve him. All of this would have been more than enough according to everyone else but then it wasn't about everyone else it was about him. He neither wanted money nor any other woman. He just wanted her.

                      What troll will their life take when these two worlds clash together? Will they make it through or will they break apart? Find out.

                      Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17859604806403505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313494389

                        24 days later

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                        Genre: Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance, Action, Adventure, School Life, Male Lead, School Life, Secret Identity, Slice Of Life, Strategy, Martial arts, Magic, Supernatural

                        Chapters: 25

                        Word Count: 108.74k

                        Status: Ongoing

                        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world_17353472606627805#review

                        Description:

                        What is fate?

                        Is it something that was destined to happen?

                        Can it be changed?

                        No. If it can be changed, it would't be known as fate, isn't it?

                        They say that fate can be control in our hands.

                        Then, is it possible to take everything in total control in my hands?, I wondered.

                        No, whatever the results is, I'm sure this was fated to happen under my control.

                        This world... will surely go along with my favor.

                        ................

                        "PLEASE!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! Join the Imperial Knights Academy as a special student or else I will be fired!!!"

                        With such a line thrown to him, the 16-year-old human, Lucifer Nightwalker von Nightmare, an orphan who was stranded on an island with her little sister and magical pet-- was forced to compromise and attend the famous Imperial Knights Academy as a special student.

                        While spending 3 years in the academy, he would meet his fated ones.

                        After he graduates, he would then become an adventurer to explore the world, unlocking the secrets behind.

                        This, will be the starting of his journey.

                        In a world of sci-fi and fantasy.

                        Humans, beast-kins, dragons, vampires, elves, fairies, spirits, dyrads, archangels, demons, dwarves, magical beasts, and much more, co-exist.

                        Which later then, he would become a king-- leading everyone to challenge against the Celestial Gods.

                        However, that was the boy's fate.

                        ......................................

                        Everything begins with that fateful meeting six years ago. His fateful meeting with the principal of The Imperial Knights Academy.

                        Yet, it wasn't even the beginning of fate.

                        .....................................

                        I just need one more review.

                          uniqueanime2 hey there! I would love to get the review for my book. I get reviews from review swap in last few days but I was not satisfied because after doing changes and correcting grammatical error also I am getting same Kind of reviews. Maybe people don't have time to read actual content and the flow of votes also decreased after reviewing. My book have 4.6 rate. No I am surely not complaining but can I actually get real review not the copy of others review. If i had said something wrong then sorry before. Right now my book is in WPC11 compitition only 3 days are left...need votes. Maybe your review can help...
                          Here is link for my book.
                          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18010425305929105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310070408

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