Hello. I‘ve read your blunt reviews and I kinda felt excited being struck with them. I’m a masochist author who appreciates constructive criticism so I’m dropping my work here. My “initial plan” was to stray away from common cliches but I kinda had the need to add a little bit. Please tell me if it’s not just a “little.” Thank you.

Title: Modern Day Psyche

Genre: Contemporary Romance

Synopsis: He’s a multibillionaire; but so is she. They were childhood friend before a series of sentimental events tore them apart.

Here’s the link http://wbnv.in/a/e6CtVJB

Have a nice day! 🤗🤗🤗

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    ZJJung
    I will review both of your novel, I don't mind.
    I just hope this doesn't count as review swap outside the official discussion thread.
    I will tell you what I think about your novel later.

      Almost all the novels with romance in the tags are damn cliche and it is the same thing over and over which is a cheap imitiation of chinese novels where the mc finds a girl and starts loving her immediately if it is a reincarnation novel it is fine otherwise it is damn bs if there is no reason for love cause you do'nt love someone at first sight that is just attraction so as I said it is BS

        Carciphones_02 Thank you so much! You don't have to leave a review but I would greatly appreciate your opinion on it :) I'm trying to make my novel not the usual romance type so without any of the cliches and you seem to be an expert on that topic ;) so here I am asking for your help.

        The CEO novels are really annoying, not all of them but most of them are, they always treat the FL as their sex toy and harass her, they must surely neet by sexual encounter and she is always treated badly by the ML but she still loves him, she clearly didn't want to sleep with him in the beginning but you find her doing some silly stuff with him later and that just pushes me away from the novel
        Most of them are also too fast-paced when it comes to how dirty their relationship becomes.

        3 months later

        NewCultivator I could see you put quite a bit of time and research into it 👌 finally someone who brought everything together and on point

          Okay, I'm just gonna leave a comment here so that I can come back at any given time. A nice, informative thread this is.

          Hi Indonesian readers!
          Read & review my story here:

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/ordinary-hannah_15029100705520005

          Title: Ordinary Hannah

          Genre: Romance, Dreams, Friendship

          Synopsis:
          Terlalu biasa untuk menjadi peran utama, Caroline Hannah Alexander memiliki masa lalu kehidupan yang berjalan dengan sempurna. Hingga suatu hal membuat kehidupannya berbanding terbalik, yang tersisa hanya gema lirih yang membuat Hannah ingin lari sejauh mungkin agar tak mendengarnya lagi, dan memulai semuanya dari awal.

          Lika-liku kehidupan yang awalnya Hannah anggap sempurna itu tidak berjalan semestinya. Tidak ada jalan lain selain menghadapinya. Hannah harus terus berjalan dengan takdir baru yang akan menghanyutkannya ke lautan asing yang penuh misteri. Lautan kehidupan yang memusingkan melebihi integral tingkat tiga!

          Perjuangan mengejar cita-cita atau cinta? Hannah bertaruh untuk keduanya!

          Salam hangat,

          -Channahs

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