Just_Scissors I already found someone else for the job but when she is done then if you are still willing then you can help but you can send me your novel link on discord Prettydimple#2993, I put the wrong user before. I will review your novel now. Sorry for the late reply?
prettydimple
- Jun 16, 2023
- Joined May 13, 2020
I am writing a webnovel but I am not entirely confident it is able to draw the attention of the readers and I want constructive critique and suggestions. If you want a favour in return then please let me know.
Dm me on discord (Prettydimple~2993) or Instagram ( abbyoni4 )you are interested.https://www.webnovel.com/book/romance-of-flame-and-ice_17014730705143805
This is a parallel world novel where the female lead in both worlds dies at the same time but their soul gets joined together in the ancient world, this is not a revenge story but the Fl is not a pushover, I assure it will be worth your time and attention.
Already has over 200 chapters.there is definitely
a lot, the music, the schooling experience and many much more.Just_Rufina I read a news saying that, this is the link if you want to confirm it.
https://morningstaronline.co.uk/article/w/nigeria-using-israeli-surveillance-technology-spy-dissidentsJust_Rufina yeah it is, if only we didn't have such corrupt and selfish leaders
does anyone know if the winners of the webnovel spirity award have been announced
MITCHIEWilliams yeah that is really hilarious, considering that they would never take such actions against corruption and bad governance in their own country, these politicians are just too selfish and evil
well, I saw news saying that the Nigerian government are using Israeli technologies to spy on the citizens, like their calls, messages nd posts, does anyone in the country know if that is really going on?
I am also curious
oh, I am really pleased to see this thread as NIGERIAN.
The CEO novels are really annoying, not all of them but most of them are, they always treat the FL as their sex toy and harass her, they must surely neet by sexual encounter and she is always treated badly by the ML but she still loves him, she clearly didn't want to sleep with him in the beginning but you find her doing some silly stuff with him later and that just pushes me away from the novel
Most of them are also too fast-paced when it comes to how dirty their relationship becomes.Title: Romance of flame and ice.
Synopsis: This is the story of two women existing in different worlds, one is a skilled general surgeon and a beauty/ badass queen while the other is a powerful flame young mistress who has been locked up in the wind sect for years, Yu Yan forgot apart of her high school life because of an accident but fate helps her meet Chen Kai who is part of the memory she forgot, he tries his best to come into her heart again, just like he did before but will he succeed?
Huo Lan is locked up in the wind sect but with the love of the young master of the wind sect and the fourth prince with a hidden identity, will she be able to regain her freedom or will she dive deeper into bondage?
When their soul gets intertwined, how will they survive in one body?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/romance-of-flame-and-ice_17014730705143805
You surely won't be disappointed.If you are interested in a parallel world and transmigration story with an amnesiac female lead, with a love-hate romance further down the story, then you might want to try this;
https://www.webnovel.com/book/romance-of-flame-and-ice_17014730705143805
I bet you won't be disappointed.GegeSadewa I agree with your point but there are times when things should make sense and when they shouldn't, such stories should at least take at least two or three days for the MC to understand but they understand as soon as they wake up, it is not even about reality but sense, but yeah....if you don't like it the novel
then move on.The worst novel plots for me is transmigration when the girl gets transmigrated into another world, they realize that they have been transmigrated immediately, there is no element of shock, disbelief or them trying to go back to their world, it annoys me how they quickly understand what had happened when in reality, no one will be able to believe that the got transmigrated into another world, and the most annoying part is when they understand the memory of the body they have taken, I feel like authors should put themselves into the character's shoes and try to be realistic sometimes.
I am shamelessly recommending my book, I am very sure it will give you a pleasant reading experience.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/romance-of-flame-and-ice_17014730705143805sharrnister okay very soon, thanks
[unknown] okay very soon, thanks