MortalLearner

Umm, well first of all... I started reading through your stories, in search of a mistake I could point out, but I gave up halfway and just started enjoying your book.

You can give my book a read if you like. I won't mind if you just write something mindless on it. Mine turned out to be something similar, anyway.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/shades-of-the-new-world_18089753406363105

      Who would like to review swap with me here is my link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-son-in-law_18378498606588005
      and If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see.

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        Who would like to review swap with me here is my link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-son-in-law_18378498606588005
        and If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see.

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          ??????????????????????????Who would like to review swap with me here is my link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-son-in-law_18378498606588005
          and If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see.

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            ??????????????????????????Who would like to review swap with me here is my link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-son-in-law_18378498606588005
            and If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see.

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              Hey babes! Interested in a review swapping so, ping me if you're into doing one!

              Title: Devil's Pinky

              Genre: Romance (HI KAKIGORI)

              Devil's Pinky

              Synopsis:

              His eyes promised her of utmost loyalty and faith – to bring down even the heavens with storms that will swallow the skies should she be hurt, to create hell on earth and incinerate anyone and anything so even tears will evaporate.

              His pitch dark world resembled starless nights, and he would never imagine finding someone who shone so brilliantly his world lit up. It was a timid green flame, yet it blazed with brazen gentleness, without any fear of his bleak darkness putting it out.

                Open to swapping!

                Title: Aether
                Genre: Fantasy Romance
                Description: Fayre has been struggling since her parents died to provide for her younger sister, Emily. In order to make ends meet, Fayre accepts a deal with a large entertainment company, Hyperion Studios, that her body will be donated to science should anything happen to her.

                When Fayre meets an untimely accident and dies, her consciousness is uploaded into the virtual world Aether. Trapped inside this world filled with monsters, knights, demons and magic, Fayre is desperate to get back to her sister in the real world, who is now fending for herself. Armed with her quick intelligence, strength and a large black sword, Fayre learns that the only way through the game is to play it – and survive.

                As she wanders through the game, she meets other trapped souls, criminals who have been entered into the games, and the ultra wealthy beta-players. The mysterious game masters have promised freedom or life to one who can beat the game, but all have perished in their attempts to make their way through the treacherous landscapes and beat the high-powered bosses that wait at each level.

                Fayre explores this new world around her, the new companions and quests that await, and she must ask herself: can she survive? Will she be able to save those she loves, and herself?

                  Review swap please? 4 chapters so far and counting but I would like some feedback thus far

                  In a world where magic is in abundance and heavily relied upon, elves find they are losing their place. Mages being born into an elvish family is rare enough to leave the race in decline, leaving them little choice to retreat back to their ancestral homes in the woods of the world.

                  Cyran Arthelius is a relatively young elf who grew up on his fathers stories as an adventurer and dreams of having adventures of his own one day. However, tragedy forces him upon his adventure far before he is ready and he will soon realise that there is more at stake than he first realises.

                  This is going to be the first novel I have ever written so I will do my utmost to make it as gripping a read as possible!
                  This will not be a fairy tale like story! There will be violence, deception, love and a character who goes through his own trials and battles his own demons.

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-elderwood-guardian_18475052406970805

                    ??????????????????????????Who would like to review swap with me here is my link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-son-in-law_18378498606588005
                    and If someone rates the book at 3-4 stars, I sincerely believe that there was an issue with the book. After all, I can’t notice everything wrong, so I will check to see if there can be any improvements. Additionally, I hope that people who give 3-4 stars will specify what problems they see.

                    And if you don't mines go in my profile and click on the heart icon i'm gladly to do yours too here is the link to my profile to click on the heart icon https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4309856610?appId=10
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