Jo_J done with the review https://m.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-king-arthur_18601387905266505
December 2020: Review Swap Here
Jo_J done with the review https://m.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-king-arthur_18601387905266505
trade me please
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lord-of-evil-spirit-pets_18856737606474405
I only have on chapter :). Trying to get 10 reviews before I release more.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lord-of-evil-spirit-pets_18856737606474405
Please swap reviews with me :).
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lord-of-evil-spirit-pets_18856737606474405
swap?
I only have one chapter so far :). Will upload more once I have 10 reviews.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lord-of-evil-spirit-pets_18856737606474405
I'll review swap with you if you're still interested. My story is only one chapter, but I have roughly 30 - 40 written. :) (Trying to get 10 reviews first). Will review you after you review me. (I'd like to mention i have a 100 percent return rate during review swaps.)
RazorIsSharp I just finished reading your book and im going to drop a review, could you check mine out please?
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Hi people! I'm a new writer here on webnovel, i'm trying to polish my skills, it would mean a lot to me if you could check my novel out and give me a feedback be it here or in the form of a review,
i've been scammed before lol so i'll be reading and dropping my honest review on your story as soon as i see your review on my book/feedback here on the comment section hehe
Thank you
https://www.webnovel.com/book/3-hours---a-gamble-of-time._18404695405551305 is my link
ONGOING. ROMANCE, SCI-FI, SUSPENSE, POETIC, time travel.
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I also dont mind review swapping with anyone else who may cover any type of genres, I LOVE TO READ! SO TAG ME HERE OR DROP A REVIEW , YOU CAN ALSO DM ME ON INSTAGRAM WITH UR LINK and I shall read -
Review finished :)
RazorIsSharp
would like to swap with me?
https://m.webnovel.com/book/i-dare-not-hope_18469969606952805
Reviewed. Interested to see where the story goes.
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sure, review first, and I'll review you by later today. My story is only 2000 words, so it shouldn't take you very long.
RazorIsSharp Hi I've done my review on your novel. Make sure to leave me a review as well. Thank you :)
RazorIsSharp done.
IzannahFrame http://wbnv.in/a/6aGSn3Z
I'm going to review yours, please review mine. :)
reviewed your book :).
Gaureeey my book: https://www.webnovel.com/book/citrigar-of-eons-and-dreams_18820141906312905/the-dragon-and-the-clover_50520468268049574
It's not bad, but in the first chapter, I immediately see some ways you can make it flow better. You include 2 anaphora; There is the one about the color brown and the one where you use "wouldn't". Personally, I find the one about brown to be a bit excessive, but that's also a nitpicky opinion. The one with "wouldn't" is a bit more problematic. Using it a second time so soon runs the risk of the technique being repetitive. Those three sentences also don't feel very connected at all. I would consider writing it as one speech segment rather than three separate questions.
There are also some redundancies in other parts. Where you write "It would never be the same..." I would expect the character to be hurting physically if they were gripping their heart.
I would definitely stay away from stuff like Dave is having a minor flashback after blacking out on the floor There are many other ways to set up/describe a flashback. Though its not necessarily a novel, Orange is a manga that has a ton of flashbacks. You can check it out and see how the describe it or set it up. Just having a message like that kinda makes it weird to read.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lord-of-evil-spirit-pets_18856737606474405
I'm looking for review swaps if anyone is interested! My story is only one chapter that's 2000 words, and shouldn't take less than 10 minutes to read! Thank you for the opportunity!