AuHNG Would love to see how this fares Link

It is not my locked book. It is a book I wrote almost a year ago. Also added your book to my library

      AuHNG not even sure. I'm going to have to take a look at that

          sharrnister

          I was reading really fast, but I'll see if it improves, good luck!

          I was a really bad writer when I started writing, everyone is constantly improving.

            sharrnister

            one thing I recommend is working with an outline, and not making the romance cringy.

            That's all I can say, cause tbh, most romance is cringy to me lol.

                Overlord_Venus

                pretty cool.

                How come it doesn't have more views?

                I guess it's harder to get noticed on web novel now after they started promoting mostly featured novels.

                    Overlord_Venus

                    Oh, your novel got restricted, I think.

                    That's probably why.

                    You might want to appeal with web novel or something.

                        AuHNG thank you for your opinion, yea tbh the first chap to me is cringy lmao but thank you again

                          AuHNG thank you for your opinion, yea tbh the first chap to me is cringy lmao but thank you again

                            Hi! Why don't you try this one!
                            alernatetext

                            When a mundane, idyllic life is finally disrupted by approaching death, unraveling memories, strange conversations, and blossoming love.
                            June is your typical high school loner who prefers to use her astronomical brain to question the world than learn how to make friends. Others think she's spoiled, snobbish, arrogant, but within her is three years' worth of forgotten memories she cannot pull to the surface and strings of complexities from being an adopted child. However, one day as she winds up on her haunted territory to eat lunch, she sees a rather unexpected presence; the school's dreamy hero, Daire, who seems to be hiding a life-changing mystery.

                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/death-is-beautiful..._18788658906170105

                              AuHNG I can totally agree on what you said. I will edit the chapters. Thank you for the advice!

                                Hello okay, I'm interested, you can try mine if you like.
                                I was on hiatus, an I'm back to continue my book.

                                links

                                I will collect yours...

                                good night

                                  AuHNG It didn't do well on webnovel, dunno why. I just contracted it to another site and have been posting it there. It's hard for any new themes to do well on webnovel

                                      AuHNG

                                      How boring is it? The first five or so chapters will be similar, so if it's put off, then I can change it. The story will be faster paced as it progresses. I appreciate your honesty.

                                          Admisful

                                          I dunno, I'll have to continue reading.

                                          It might not be boring later.

                                              Anotoki

                                              I go back to review all the books in my collection, so I'll comment directly on your book if I see any improvement.

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