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AuHNG not even sure. I'm going to have to take a look at that

sharrnister

I was reading really fast, but I'll see if it improves, good luck!

I was a really bad writer when I started writing, everyone is constantly improving.

sharrnister

one thing I recommend is working with an outline, and not making the romance cringy.

That's all I can say, cause tbh, most romance is cringy to me lol.

Overlord_Venus

pretty cool.

How come it doesn't have more views?

I guess it's harder to get noticed on web novel now after they started promoting mostly featured novels.

Overlord_Venus

Oh, your novel got restricted, I think.

That's probably why.

You might want to appeal with web novel or something.

AuHNG thank you for your opinion, yea tbh the first chap to me is cringy lmao but thank you again

AuHNG thank you for your opinion, yea tbh the first chap to me is cringy lmao but thank you again

AuHNG Fair enough, thanks for your time though

Hi! Why don't you try this one!

When a mundane, idyllic life is finally disrupted by approaching death, unraveling memories, strange conversations, and blossoming love.
June is your typical high school loner who prefers to use her astronomical brain to question the world than learn how to make friends. Others think she's spoiled, snobbish, arrogant, but within her is three years' worth of forgotten memories she cannot pull to the surface and strings of complexities from being an adopted child. However, one day as she winds up on her haunted territory to eat lunch, she sees a rather unexpected presence; the school's dreamy hero, Daire, who seems to be hiding a life-changing mystery.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/death-is-beautiful..._18788658906170105

AuHNG I can totally agree on what you said. I will edit the chapters. Thank you for the advice!

AuHNG It didn't do well on webnovel, dunno why. I just contracted it to another site and have been posting it there. It's hard for any new themes to do well on webnovel

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16459502305011305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310642707

Try my novel!

Here's mine: http://wbnv.in/a/6aFmfs8

AuHNG

How boring is it? The first five or so chapters will be similar, so if it's put off, then I can change it. The story will be faster paced as it progresses. I appreciate your honesty.

Admisful

I dunno, I'll have to continue reading.

It might not be boring later.

Overlord_Venus

So weird, my novel has like 250K views and it sucks LOL

Anotoki

I go back to review all the books in my collection, so I'll comment directly on your book if I see any improvement.

Title: Wanted Wanters

Genres: Shounen-Seinen, Action, Comedy, Fantasy-Adventure, Dark, Military

Synopsis: Want something?
Just think about it and you shall have it.
Money, women, power, name it and you shall have it in your grasp.
Welcome to the World of Wanters.
Dillon Ainsworth is like any other high school student except he was born with a special ability. One day he meets a mysterious man who knows about his ability after befriending that man he soon finds himself caught in a conflict between two organizations who want to use his ability for their ulterior motives.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/wanted-wanters_18203162106825905

AuHNG my fairytale