nishidurani I've added it all and I've read 2 chaps of 'where the dream losts' I'm willing to spend my powerstones to that novel[ spent my coins in reading translated novels lol ] The plot, characters are solid. All I need is to read more for me to further understand and see the character development. The only problem and noticable errors are the word capitalization and the quotations for conversations. I have no problem in terms of grammar, a little to no error. Youre making your readers understand your world slowly, I thought it was a typical medieval, Edwardian Era and world building. I'll give a detailed review once I've read 20-30+ chapters. Happy writing!

    Littlepunnie

    No, it felt good. I checked again 3 time to know if there are more. Please do continue to do that.

    May be I learn a few things from you. You must be a very good author

      Hi, how about trying mine? It's a romance fantasy story with a strong female MC. The title is Divine Fate. There's lots of adventures, actions, and mysteries.

      I've just posted the first chapter recently and plan to update once a week.

      Feedback is much appreciated 💛

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      Link: Divine Fate

      Synopsis:
      From the moment she was born, Cierre knew she was different from the others. For starters, she was born from a tree. Not only that, she was able to walk and speak the moment she opened her eyes to the world. She had basic knowledge like a person that had been living in society for a good few years.

      So, why was she born different? What was the purpose of her birth?

      This was something Cierre had been questioning herself. It wasn't until her coming of age ceremony did she has a glimpse of the answers she was looking for.

      Cierre received a prophecy. One bearing an ill-omened fate, and knew she ought to put a stop to this terrible fate. Not because she wished to be a mighty heroine that saved the world. No, it was because this future would bring disaster to everything, including those precious to her. Her family, her friends, the beautiful residence she called her home and the city she had been living her whole life. Oh, how terrible would that be if they were to be ruined.

      "You wish to ruin everything in your sight? Go ahead. It has nothing to do with me. However, mess with what I deem precious, be it my fate or not, I will kill you without mercy."

      On her quest to find the answer for her life-long questions and put a stop to a terrible fate, Cierre met many people and experienced many things. She encountered joy and sorrow.

      Amongst all things that she had experienced, there was only one person who made a massive impact on her life. She had put his name in a big bold red letters on her mental note. This person would pester her non-stop and caused her blood to spike most of the time and at other times, confusion. Oh, and maybe a bit of happiness. Just a bit.

      And so, the gears of fate began to turn. Moving towards the divine fate.

        nishidurani I write trash tbh. My eyes are itching, I want to continue reading yours, I'll recommend it to my friends cuz they love witches hehe

          lazule_n You only have 1 chap miss? She was born from a tree!? The first chap which is the only chap is interesting. I'm imagining it vividly with anime characters lol. I do not have any probs concerning your writing, you have chosen and used wise words, ain't complicated and easy to discern. Is this your first time writing? Anyways, I'll add a review when it has more chapters. It is clear to read that the chap was edited and it was a plus point. Already added to library! I'm waiting for Cierra's growth lel

            This thread will be up till tomorrow morning!!!!!!

              Littlepunnie Thanks for the feedback, and yes, it's my first time writing for an original story. I didn't want to update too often because I don't have too many chapters at the moment. I will probably update the next one in a few days.☺️

              SrtaA Already added to library! What can I say? Your readers might bash me if I say something wrong lol haha I'll just leave my review directly to your novels then.
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              Wowwwww. Okay, imma leave my simple review after reading 3 chaps

                SrtaA Done never date a man in pink! I've left a... Somehow long review and I hope you'll read it. Happy Writing!

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