Ana_musings No problem. I ask because it's what comes in my mind, and to let you know what happens for me when I read. It aims to guide your writing from a reader's point of view.
As long as questions are answered in the end, it's good. A good book doesn't give all its truth at once, else you loose reader's interest so it just means you did well :)
Looking forward to your own comments on my work. Have a great week end !

      d_elfe
      Hi, yours is a contemporary romance. Mine too! Interested in swapping reviews ??

          Anyone interested in a review swap with me? If you are just leave a message with link to your story on it and take your pick from the two stories below-

          Royally Yours: Till the end of Eternity -
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/royally-yours-till-the-end-of-eternity_18151692306619505

          AMORTENTIA -
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/amortentia_17656345605122805

          I hope we gain mutual benefits from this exchange.

          Thank you in advance!

            Crackgear
            Done reviewing yours! I hope you check mine called The Grandmaster's Rebirth. Please also vote if you deemed it worthy. Something to spare for me was also really helpful.

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