CrowGurung Hi!, if you have more time, could you please check my novel as well? The title of the novel is "Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor."

I have just begun writing a novel since the beginning of this year, and it is also the first time I wrote anything in English this long. I would appreciate it if you could give me feedback on it. Thank you in advance! :) 🙏🙏🙏

      CrowGurung
      Oh. Thanks so much. At least I know i'm on the right path. I would take your advice and worked more on improving myself.

          AmateurAuthor I have read your novel and I liked it. You also have some mistakes here and there but I don't think most people would notice it or criticize it. The mistake is minimum it's nothing to worry about too much. :)

              lala_sanara I like your novel very much. I'm kinda into novels like you wrote. And I'm sorry I don't know what you meant as you said you are dragging your story to the ruins. If you mean grammatically you can read some English novels and stuffs to improve your writing. For example : In chapter 1, Line 1, I think " After reading the novel for two years" works better than "for two years of reading this novel." and if you meant the story, you can always ask the readers and get inspiration from other novels :). If you need proofreader and some editing you can contact me on discord my id is CrowGurung#4204 and I wont take payment as I'm only looking for experience.

                  CrowGurung Thank you so much, really appreciate it. I will contact you then, I sent a friend request, it has the same name as mine here, Lala_sanara💞

                      CrowGurung Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! Could I ask you for the details of those mistakes? I would like to fix them and improve myself. My discord is AmateurAuthor#7438.

                          6 days later

                          Try to check my story's, maybe you like it, I don't know

                          Luhan makes a failed suicide attempt
                          Meanwhile, Sehun is appointed a new counselor at the school
                          The past that has been forgotten opens up again .. Another chance to prove yourself lu
                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/another-chance-to-you-lu_19258735605823705

                          When Jacob is imprisoned for murdering four girls
                          The charge falls on him
                          But is he really the one who killed?
                          "Everyone can be the killer ... Be careful"
                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/steps-on-the-slope_18825772205182705/the-sky-of-annaba_50750215480725452

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                            Corola I don't know if you still need an editor. But if you still need one, you can add me on discord,
                            my tag is CrowGurung#4204

                                9 days later

                                CrowGurung Hi, I was wondering if you are still active. Can I also ask for help on my novel >-< I also added you on discord my acc there is meimei#6694

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