skyerivers Hey. I've forgot to mention that I did review yours. If you have time to review mine, I'd be grateful. Anyways, your concept in the story is very interesting and complex, but at the same time, naturally pleasing.

      Jigx Reviewed! I like the setting and the characters. The leveling up is also well-designed. There's little doubt you write as you see things happening in your mind, which is good! It's creative. Now, however, if you ask me what you can improve, I'd say that the most notable thing is grammar. However, other reviewers have told you already, so I won't insist. Just try to edit with an advance tense/grammar checker or even request help from someone else. With that fixed, it'll really be good! Kudos!

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