Hi there! I'm looking for some authors who have posted action adventure novels, preferably in a fantasy realm, to gain inspiration and share tips. I've been endlessly frustrated by stories that do not seem well-edited and have errors all over the place for grammar and punctuation. Hoping to find some like-minded authors on here to have discussions and just read/follow closely. Happy to learn and take pointers/recommendations from everyone!

Please check out my book if you are interested in the same genre: Playing Games of Despair https://www.webnovel.com/book/playing-games-of-despair-(spirity)_19854274705475405

    MR_BackStabber I have left you a review and a few pointers in the comments of different paragraphs. Please watch your punctuation as these allow readers to grasp meaning quickly. Good luck!

      PGODofficial Hi! Just add your book to my library as I'm curious about it. I'll read it later. If you'd like, you can check my story. I do not have lots of chapters for now as I'm proofreading and all, but I would be interested in having your opinion since I'm translating myself and some sentences may be quite...strange, maybe.
      (Do not worry about the BL tags, it's only up to chapter 2 for now ;) )

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        Hey there, you can try mine as well: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-chronicles-of-new-havens_13904145905143105

        Synopsis: With Elizabeth Silvera, Benedict Hawken, Shirley Adonina, and Freon Adnire, these four will rise from nothing to the top! However, it will not be easy. Strength is only gained through pain and suffering. From Fundamental Realm to Perception Realm, from Gaseous Fog to Condensed Drop, from meager Rank 1 to legendary Rank 5 Gods, this is a complex story where mortals and gods struggle alike! And this isn't just about battles, wars, and schemes. It's about how everyone grows in this increasingly diverse world! Buckle tight because this will be a long journey. This is the Chronicles of New Havens!

        PGODofficial Hello, my name is Camila and I just started this month updating my adventure, spiritual, fantasy novel. It is called A Journey For Life. if you feel like it, you are welcome to read it and even make comments and suggestions. They will be highly appreciated.

          Please have a look through my novel "The Inception of a New Bond". I'm a new writer , so I really need a lot of support !

          It's synopsis is as follows :

          "In the 687th year of the Mian dynasty ,
          When the clouds of danger would be hovering all over the country ,
          The heaven will bless an erudite on the full moon night ,
          Who will fill the whole country with happiness and light ,
          She would be very brave and smart just like her brunette hair and eyes ,
          And would uncover the truth over the lies" read Maiara , the youngest archaeologist in the whole world who had received the most famous , 'Garnet award.'

          Wanna go on in this adventurous journey with Maiara in the past ? Then what are you waiting for ? Read ahead ...

          I've got one that's in the dark fantasy genre: https://www.webnovel.com/book/darkrising_18941351705654405
          I'm currently editing the first book and slowly writing the second book. It's decent English, the first few chapters are a struggle with tenses, which is why I'm doing a big edit. I feel like the later chapters handled the tenses better, but that may just be me.

            Oh, hello there. I'm not sure how high of a standard you're looking for when you say 'good' English, but I'd say the work I'm currently writing may be of interest to you. I've written a few novels on the other acc so I think of my English as, at least, satisfactory. The novel is, indeed, an action-adventure set in a different world (reincarnation) so if that seems okay with you, please do check it out;
            Here's a link:
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/spirit-realm-the-devil's-path_19866703805538405
            I'll read your novel and give you a review after that so if you find this work of mine interesting, feel free to drop a review.
            If anyone else is up for review swap, hit me up as well wink

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