I'm glad that you're enjoying it thus far! I hope you'll see it through to the end (of the current chapters). My novel/lore has technically been 10 years in the making, and I've only recently started to publish it once I believed my writing quality reached 'decent' enough of a level. It's funny too because there's a lot of things I made up on the spot as I was writing it, so I'm curious if you'll pick up on those parts.
Repeating adjectives is quite interesting! I guess it boils down to my specific writing style, since I like to emphasize things more 'aggressively'. That's also why I started using exclamation marks more! I will keep your feedback in mind! Feel free to critique my novel as you see fit. I'm not one to get offended by it. As always, thanks for reading!