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Hey I'm here to swap novel , I'll review back so review mine
Name - the bloody angel
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-bloody-angel_20187781206898205
Hey I'm here to swap novel , I'll review back so review mine
Name - the bloody angel
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-bloody-angel_20187781206898205
Arcana_Legends Thanks man, I appreciate it! Yeah, this wasn't meant to be a webnovel originally, and looking a the others, the first chapter could for sure stand to be shorter. I'll also review it again and try to make it more obvious it's a dream. Love the feedback!
MITCHIEWilliams Reviewing right now, I gotcha fam
wookie0_ Taking care of it right now. Here's mine!
Findmysteryinme Already reviewed yours, it is filled with mystery and horror.
MITCHIEWilliams Done with reviewing yours
Would anyone like to swap reviews? I would. Hereโs the link to The Lawes Girl.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lawes-girl_18892183706621805
KayLillyt_1 I would love to. Here's mine!
Novel: Pages Apart
KayLillyt_1 I'm up
Here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/never-normal_20024857606712105
Will review yours soon!
KayLillyt_1 Finished, all I gotta say is great job. You seem to have mastered the art of written dialogue between multiple characters, and it was impressive.
Findmysteryinme Thank you!
wookie0_ I am up for it. here is mine.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/deception-a-trap-in-every-step._20244386206607105
I will be reading yours soon
fifyfd sure thing.
Here is mine
https://m.webnovel.com/book/deception-a-trap-in-every-step._20244386206607105
I will be reading yours soonish
Would you like to swap reviews with me.
Here is mine
https://m.webnovel.com/book/deception-a-trap-in-every-step._20244386206607105
I will read yours soon
Do you want to swap reviews with me,
Here the link and title.
Link::
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/19962748106232705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4304744526
TITLE::
" A Wish Of Lazy Otaku"
I will reply to your review in under 6hours.
So do give a try....
kuhaku_sora the biggest thing that I'd say is you probably don't need a prologue since you immediately jump past everything toward characters who don't seem to know they're in VR or that they're NPC's in a VR game. There are some wording issues and typos. But, the start is pretty good just some that world-building could be integrated into the story a bit better.
Abysalyounglord Reviewing it now!
Novel:Pages Apart
https://m.webnovel.com/book/pages-apart_20323731805210405