I have times to do some review swaps, the only thing I'm looking for, for those that are reviewing my story is please look at my verb tense. If you could! I'm bad at it😭! But it's fine if you can't either. Other than that go ahead and review however you like, but remember positively. Constructive criticisms is good too.

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/mafia-tears_20758496806707905

P.s it's new, it's fresh, only four chapter in! This is a bargain for those that have more than twenty chapters already! And please be patience, I'll get to everyone who review mine.

    dinoriii Hi, I'm already reviewing your story, the queen of shadows.
    It's under Aeipathy_02 account. Waiting for yours πŸ™

      Sun23
      Thanks for the review. But did you happen to delete it or something. I can read it clearly on my phone, but for some reason the review isn't public on my story or anything.

        Sun23
        Maybe that's it. That sucks though, because it was such a well thought out review. I really liked it.

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