d_elfe

Hey, thanks for all the constructive criticism and comments! I'll get started on your book now!

    THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST

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    https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-7teen-let-the-pain-exist_19117090906475105
    Synopsis :
    Dhruv is a 17 yr old teenager who is a boy full of mysteries. Six months ago, Dhruv's father died in a car accident. And from then, Dhruv hasn't had a good day ahead. From his mom's negligence towards him to school bullies, everything seems to add more and more to his misery. But things are different now, it's 17 Jan 2017, and things aren't as they were. Fate had taken its dark turns, and now police are standing on his doors, asking questions regarding the serial killings of three of his classmates. What does Dhruv have to do with it? Does Dhruv know something?
    It's not a teenage drama! It's FUCKIN murder mystery! Here, don't expect anything. Things are a bit twisted as TRUTH ISN'T WHITE ANYMORE‼️ And
    Pain, Let It Exist!

    Anyone for a review swap?

      Adwaid_Nambiar

      Wow thank you so much💕
      I love your book too. Interesting twists!😊
      I'm done with your review +coll, comments, liked tags. Keep up the good work 👍

      d_elfe
      Done as well! Such a wonderful read, I can't wait to continue reading when I get some more time

        Aman_Taxak

        Done with your review.
        Just to let you know, I noticed you picked one of the generic reviews on your book and posted it for me as your review. Heh😒 You didn't even bother to read my book and actually give a proper review.
        Dude, don't do that to people. You're not deceiving anyone. People actually notice these things.

        I just decided to read, comment and give you a proper review because that's me. Trust me, others will trash your book.

        I have times to do some review swaps, the only thing I'm looking for, for those that are reviewing my story is please look at my verb tense. If you could! I'm bad at it😭! But it's fine if you can't either. Other than that go ahead and review however you like, but remember positively. Constructive criticisms is good too.

        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/mafia-tears_20758496806707905

        P.s it's new, it's fresh, only four chapter in! This is a bargain for those that have more than twenty chapters already! And please be patience, I'll get to everyone who review mine.

          dinoriii Hi, I'm already reviewing your story, the queen of shadows.
          It's under Aeipathy_02 account. Waiting for yours 🙏

            Sun23
            Thanks for the review. But did you happen to delete it or something. I can read it clearly on my phone, but for some reason the review isn't public on my story or anything.

              Sun23
              Maybe that's it. That sucks though, because it was such a well thought out review. I really liked it.

                KingAraragi Thank you, but damn! If you want me to write another one I can? Such a shame, I took my time writing my heart out too since your story is good.

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