Lonewo1f done. Please review back.
Novel: My Time System
July 2021- Review Swap here!
Matthew_Chuang done. Please review back.
Matthew_Chuang My novel is My Time System
Itsuki_Suzuki Hey, already gave the review with the name of REaper.
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My new work! This is only exclusive in Webnovel. Kindly give it a try and let's review swap as well.
Title: HELL HEAVEN SECRET AGENCY
Synopsis:
100 years ago, the world merged into one, the world of humans, demons, angels, and beasts. But in this world, humans have more advantages as their technology is rising rapidly. The other beings are demon populations on the verge of extinction as the alliance of humans, angels, and the beast constantly hunts them.
The demon lord was weak, and he commands the high and greater demons to infiltrate and breed with humans to increase their numbers. The dark angels and savage beast joined and to create a massive army of halfbreed humans. To destroy the alliances. The plan was successful, and they made a secret group known only in the underworld called Heaven Hell Secret Agency. A group that helps other races not limited to demons survive this rash world and slaughter the greedy human official who keeps controlling other races to dominate the world.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/hell-heaven-secret-agency_20544453306517405
Itsuki_Suzuki Done!
Itsuki_Suzuki With all due respect, I can tell that you didn't actually read the story. The review is generic, and after further investigation, I found that it was identical to all your other ones.
I understand wanting to get as many reviews / views as possible, but that is not my goal. I'd be willing to leave a review of your first chapter, but only if I get a legitimate one from you in return.
Gave a review to your story! You don't have to review mine, yet if you feel like it, here it is:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-the-yokai-lord_20169607505402405
Immanioripse Sure, waiting on you to review me. I already did yours.
Samantha_R_Samuel I was waiting for your review, but it didn't came. Are you busy?
maryam_library There is no limit but you would like to have moderate number of views, otherwise they might look kind of fake lol
Cyclxne
Alancaster
Arlemit
A_lucid_Dreamer
Matthew_Chuang
Will you give a review to mine, and I'll review yours. Here's the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/hell-heaven-secret-agency_20544453306517405
Arlemit I'm done giving you reviews.
I can only suggest fixing the paragraphs and indents for the sounds like boom, woosh.
Good use of terming sound, but much more if you give it an impact.
After the description of the sound, put the bracket. [BOOM!] [WOOSH] [SWING] [RING] if you want to catch the reader's attention on what sound it is. You may remove them, actually, since you already describe them in the story, yet that's only my suggestion.
Good job writing it!
Thank you so much andy. I'm touched. I'm trying to be fine. This issue is devastating.
