My new work! This is only exclusive in Webnovel. Kindly give it a try and let's review swap as well.

Title: HELL HEAVEN SECRET AGENCY

Synopsis:
100 years ago, the world merged into one, the world of humans, demons, angels, and beasts. But in this world, humans have more advantages as their technology is rising rapidly. The other beings are demon populations on the verge of extinction as the alliance of humans, angels, and the beast constantly hunts them.

The demon lord was weak, and he commands the high and greater demons to infiltrate and breed with humans to increase their numbers. The dark angels and savage beast joined and to create a massive army of halfbreed humans. To destroy the alliances. The plan was successful, and they made a secret group known only in the underworld called Heaven Hell Secret Agency. A group that helps other races not limited to demons survive this rash world and slaughter the greedy human official who keeps controlling other races to dominate the world.

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/hell-heaven-secret-agency_20544453306517405

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    Itsuki_Suzuki With all due respect, I can tell that you didn't actually read the story. The review is generic, and after further investigation, I found that it was identical to all your other ones.

    I understand wanting to get as many reviews / views as possible, but that is not my goal. I'd be willing to leave a review of your first chapter, but only if I get a legitimate one from you in return.

        Arlemit I'm done giving you reviews.

        I can only suggest fixing the paragraphs and indents for the sounds like boom, woosh.
        Good use of terming sound, but much more if you give it an impact.
        After the description of the sound, put the bracket. [BOOM!] [WOOSH] [SWING] [RING] if you want to catch the reader's attention on what sound it is. You may remove them, actually, since you already describe them in the story, yet that's only my suggestion.

        Good job writing it!

            ANDYY_X

            Thank you so much andy. I'm touched. I'm trying to be fine. This issue is devastating.

                THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST

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                https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-7teen-let-the-pain-exist_19117090906475105
                Synopsis :
                Dhruv is a 17 yr old teenager who is a boy full of mysteries. Six months ago, Dhruv's father died in a car accident. And from then, Dhruv hasn't had a good day ahead. From his mom's negligence towards him to school bullies, everything seems to add more and more to his misery. But things are different now, it's 17 Jan 2017, and things aren't as they were. Fate had taken its dark turns, and now police are standing on his doors, asking questions regarding the serial killings of three of his classmates. What does Dhruv have to do with it? Does Dhruv know something?
                It's not a teenage drama! It's FUCKIN murder mystery! Here, don't expect anything. Things are a bit twisted as TRUTH ISN'T WHITE ANYMORE‼️ And                 Pain, Let It Exist!

                Anyone for a review swap? I might take a while as I am a slow reader, but I'll review your novel so, anyone?
                Btw if you don't mind, help me with some chapter comments, I don't have many! (still it's alright, if don't do it)

                  Alancaster I'm sorry for the long wait. I read until chapter 10. I love how the dialog was written. I'm hooked to this type of story. I'm usually a romance writer from other platforms and trying a fantasy story on this platform.

                  It's impressive that with every passing I read, I can't stop. LOL! I'll add yours to my library and read it later.

                      Cyclxne Thank you for sharing your story, and I like it. But, yeah, my story stability updates are not good since I'll be updating the story only on Monday and Friday. Also, I have exclusive contracts with another platform that I need to update every day, so the update here is very slow.

                      Anyways thanks for the review!

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